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General Q&A about the craft of professional writing, editing, and publishing. Questions about all types of writing are welcome -- fiction, technical documentation, scholarly articles, poetry, scriptwriting, blogs, and more.

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Is it acceptable to mix how you address the reader in an instructional Wiki?

I'm working on a Wiki article that explains to new developers how our product life-cycle works. Originally, my goal was to completely avoid the word "you" and use a more general description like "...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by ray023‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What is the proper way to write a date containing two days in a row?

I have a presentation that will go from August 4th to the 5th. On my title slide I'd like to list the dates in the most concise and simple way possible. What's the best style? I currently have: A...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Mark‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Publishing a Children's Picture book -- Question about an App and a Printed version

I've written and had illustrated a children's picture book. I'm thinking of making this into an App for download from the Apple Apps store. I'm also considering looking for a publisher to publish...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Richard‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Breaking Into Technical Writing - Where to Start (from a programming background)

I'm currently in the process of expanding my company from doing coding & web development to more technical writing and freelance tech journalism. Although my background is mainly in technology,...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by theonlylos‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Write to the finish, or edit as you go?

Someone asked this question in another forum, and I thought I'd bounce it around in here to see what kind of responses we get. If you are working on writing a new book, is it better to just write a...

3 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Steven Drennon‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What are examples of fiction books picked up by publishers after being self-published?

I've seen some references to commercial publishers picking up a self-published novel if it's been selling well. Can you point me to a few specific examples of this happening? Fiction only, pleas...

0 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Standback‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Software recommendations for magazine layout?

I use Word now but I would like to find a better software for laying out a magazine. In this magazine, I would like to create columns (2 or 3 depending on the page), insert image on 1, 2 or 3 colu...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by Jonathan‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Multiple POVs in a single scene

This question came up in another forum, so I thought I'd share it here. Should there be only one POV per scene? Is it OK to go with multiple POVs? An example is a scene with two characters facing ...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by Steven Drennon‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Author's notes: yay or nay?

Should a writer include author's notes in their book that either express thanks to the reader or provide background information on the book itself? If so, should these be at the front of the book o...

3 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Steven Drennon‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Advice on interface text in a videogame

[This fits somewhere between technical writing and user experience, so perhaps this is the wrong board] I'm developing a modification to a popular videogame (a Playstation One RPG), with the expre...

3 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Jimmy Breck-McKye‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Source ideas for monsters in a fantasy novel?

Does anyone have any suggestions on where to go to get some ideas on different types of monsters that can be created for a fantasy novel? I'm not talking about different variations of zombies or va...

4 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Steven Drennon‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How do I balance work with my love of writing?

I'm a programmer and an aspiring writer. I love writing. Over the past year, I had been working on my first novel. Making the plot, dimensioning the characters, integrating conflicts etc. And when ...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by Amin Mohamed Ajani‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What can I write to improve reader participation at this blog?

I work for a costume company that has a company blog intended to inspire costuming and general ideas. We focus on Halloween sales, but we also have Renaissance and Oktoberfest themed costumes that...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Lindsey Lewis‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Do you need to get author's permission to quote him in a non-fiction book?

I have a non-fiction book idea that would frequently use quotes/reviews from a specific author. Would I need to get that author's permission to quote him/her, and to base the entire book on these ...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Debra‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Pros and Cons of different styles of publishing

I was reading on the meta site that someone thinks we're hostile to self-publishing, and I read over some old questions looking for evidence. I didn't really find signs of hostility, but I certain...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Kate S.‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Press Kit proof-read in exchange for an app license?

I would like to find someone who would proof-read a Press Kit of an Mac OS X app in exchange for a license. Do you know any website / service where I could find some English native speaker, ideally...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by piobyz‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Should I start work on a sequel before I have sold my book?

I finished the 1st draft of my book, and have put it in the freezer(as I asked about in this question). I was planning to start work on a sequel of the book in the meantime. But I was told by some...

3 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Shantnu Tiwari‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to create space

Recently, a few snippets of my fiction have received critiques along the lines of 'Does not give a sense of space'. Or 'needs more description, sights and sounds'. I think where I am going wrong ...

3 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by M.A‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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When should one use a section sign (§)?

When I asked this on English.SE, the question was closed; it was suggested that I ask on Writers.SE instead. To be clear, I mean the section sign § (utf-8: 0xC2 0xA7), which is available via \S in ...

1 answer  ·  posted 12y ago by Warrick‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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A letter of recommendation

I am a programmer/engineer who has been asked to write a letter of recommendation for a colleague, who wishes it to help him pursue higher education. Since I feel it necessary, to be very professi...

1 answer  ·  posted 12y ago by Zasz‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is it really necessary to add things like "I thought, I wondered, etc," in first-person narrative?

Example: The whole thing sounded a bit strange. How had she gotten my number? I wondered. I didn't know anyone called Maria. The whole thing sounded a bit strange. How had she gotten my...

2 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by Alexandro Chen‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Which language to use when writing a multinational story

I'm Brazilian and I'm writing a book in portuguese. However the story takes place first in Europe, i.e. Italy, Portugal, and London. Of course this requires of me some research about the culture of...

1 answer  ·  posted 11y ago by ClayKaboom‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is the following piece of text comprehensible and written in good style?

I am a PhD candidate and I am having difficulty in communicating effectively in writing. Specifically, this post is a piece of text submitted for critique and, in addition, explains what I am tryin...

2 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by mfrank.23‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How do I start a business-presentation?

How do you welcome a business audience to your presentation? I've thought of: Hello, my name is [prename] [surname] and I am going to talk about [...] but it sounds rather like a school present...

1 answer  ·  posted 11y ago by Martin Thoma‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Knowing When To Cite?

In my essay (specifically a recount essay of a moment in the past), my objective is to end with the discussion of Death as a being (because my recounted moment will be related to death). I'd like t...

2 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by jeremy‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How can I reconcile the exposition of the three act scheme vs. starting out with a bang?

I am a few thousand words into my newest draft and starting to question if I picked the right beginning. As usual, when I get back into the habit of writing regularly, I have also gotten back into ...

2 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by StrixVaria‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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When to use the em dash (—) in fiction writing?

I always see the em dash (—) in fiction writing. Here are some example from Haruki Murakami's After Dark: Komugi comes in and takes something from one of the cartons piled against the wall—a...

1 answer  ·  posted 11y ago by Alexandro Chen‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What is "head popping" and why is it bad?

Most of my writing experience has been with first person, nonfiction stories. Now I want to try some fiction. I'm working in third person, but I'm a little bit confused about how to pull something ...

1 answer  ·  posted 11y ago by Tim Elhajj‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Avoiding unintended rudeness or accusatory tones in reminder emails

I am in one of the newsletter teams of my company. Last week, I had mailed the Vice-President of our company to write an article for our newsletter, to which he replied in affirmative and mailed me...

1 answer  ·  posted 11y ago by bengaluriga‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Are there any metrical (scansion) dictionaries?

There are plenty of rhyming dictionaries; is there such a thing as a metrical dictionary? Sometimes in fixed-form poetry, I need a word to fit a specific position in a line, and it would be really ...

1 answer  ·  posted 11y ago by Aaron Davies‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is it okay to call the reader's target audience stupid?

I'm a tech genre author, and have already published one book on Android development. However, this book was focused more on the developer of the apps, than the user. Now I'm working on my second b...

7 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by Raghav Sood‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is the first draft of a novel usually shorter than the finished work?

I finished the first draft of a novel I'm writing. Right now, it has 17000 words. I've heard that novels these days range from 60,000 to 150,000 words, so I'm a little bit worried (I'm hoping to ha...

2 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by Alexandro Chen‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How much $ to calculate for an Editor

I plan to self publish a book (non fiction). Currently I have 150.000 characters, but when it's done I will end up with around 250.000. I am not a native english speaker but write the book in engli...

1 answer  ·  posted 11y ago by Christian‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Should one use the legal "shall" in requirements documents and specification documents?

At least in the US, "will" has replaced "shall" in most every context, with the notable exception of the "legal shall". Shall is used instead of will in legal documents to indicate a sense of oblig...

2 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by Billy ONeal‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Word Choice: When something negative happens that changes your perspective for the better [closed]

Examples: 1.Today I got in a car accident, but I now value life more. 2. Today, I stubbed my toe, but looked down and found my wife's wedding ring we thought was lost. This concept is called the b...

1 answer  ·  posted 11y ago by Brian Dant‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to get over writer's block related to revising?

I'm a PhD Student in the social sciences. When I do focused free-writing on a topic, my thoughts just fly out and I can easily generate 600-800 words an hour of relatively high quality text. Howeve...

2 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by histelheim‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to write time duration correctly

Within a user manual, I need to convey the maximum time period allowed as "365 days 23 hours 59 minutes 59 seconds" - are commas expected between each component? Is the word "and" expected before t...

2 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by Jewelya‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is this essay title critical?

I'm currently writing a critical essay, arguing individualism, narcissism and collectivism within an online society. However I feel that the title I've come of up with for this essay just isn't cr...

1 answer  ·  posted 11y ago by Phil Hudson‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Writing a very complex relationship

I am writing a webcomic, and have come upon a snag, I need two characters to like each other very much, but one is the slave of the other. In the comic, there are characters who find and use power...

2 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by Tucker Morgan‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Can I improve my beta reading skills to aid a close person's writings?

Finding beta readers were suggested to get unbiased feedback for a writer. Can one work on oneself to be able to give a more unbiased feedback to a close relative, friend, wife/husband, etc.? Can ...

1 answer  ·  posted 11y ago by n611x007‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How much should I reveal of how the world functions in fiction?

I am currently working on a fiction novel. The way the world (magic, technology, government, species etc) works is extremely complicated. Basically, the idea is to reveal the mechanics bit by bit...

2 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by Invader Zim‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to continue someone else's story gracefully, with fan-fiction?

I've been juggling some ideas for NaNoWriMo and one of them is a Doctor Who story. Now I've not read a great deal of fan fiction but I've never read any that I'd say that compares to the original, ...

1 answer  ·  posted 11y ago by Pureferret‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How do authors incorporate languages they don't speak?

In many, many English-language novels I've come across characters who speak other languages, most often French for whatever reason. In many cases, such as with Ulysses and Lolita, this is a simple...

1 answer  ·  posted 11y ago by temporary_user_name‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Using abbreviations after in-text citations

I am writing an academic paper, specifically a Position Paper, using APA. According to the Purdue OWL webpage, to cite an organisation: "First citation: (Mothers Against Drunk Driving [MADD], 2000...

1 answer  ·  posted 11y ago by Karen‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How does one write a character smarter than oneself?

How does one write a "genius" character? I don't mean a scientific genius, or someone who is a prodigious talent in math or chess or something like that. I mean the following scenario (or an equiva...

3 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by Jay‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How many errors should I expect from a proofreader?

I hired a proofreader (typos, commonly confused words, minor grammar issues etc) to look at my work, which I plan to self publish. She found most typos, but from a 66,000 word novel, missed about ...

2 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by aaa‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is it good style in fiction to write sentences as a flow of (disjointed) thoughts? [closed]

I was wondering whether it is okay to write like this or not: I never went for the grooves. But I did take a seat near the bar table and checked out the pretty ladies. Drinking was not my cup o...

1 answer  ·  posted 11y ago by Amin Mohamed Ajani‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How many errors per page volume is typically "okay" in a book?

Suppose I'm in charge of getting a three hundred page book published. I'll do all reasonable things to get it proofread, but still there is a chance that some errors will persist. Now the book goe...

4 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by sharptooth‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How can I help a writing-phobic but competent student develop their writing?

I am a professor in a science department and I am working with a student that has significant anxiety about writing, such that they have opted to receive a lower final grade rather than turn in req...

3 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by DQdlM‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Converting Word pages to book pages, for novels?

The title says it all. How can I gauge how long my novel would be, if for example I've written 400 single-spaced pages of size 12 Times New Romans in Microsoft Word?

3 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by temporary_user_name‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭