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General Q&A about the craft of professional writing, editing, and publishing. Questions about all types of writing are welcome -- fiction, technical documentation, scholarly articles, poetry, scriptwriting, blogs, and more.

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An (Collaborative) Online Outline

I'm writing a book – more as a hobby than anything else. As an amateur I often get lost regarding the extent I should include in the chapters. But the greatest problem for me is that I did not de...

0 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by ClayKaboom‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Switching from past to present tense?

I'm thinking of writing a novel where my character narrates flashbacks through the hardest times of his life written in past tense, leading up to the present tense. I was considering switching to p...

1 answer  ·  posted 11y ago by Nick‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Vision/dream as an effective opening?

I'm looking for opinions on the effectiveness of this opening scene. It's a vision, not that he knows that at first. He thinks it a dream and won't quite act on it straight away. The vision was giv...

4 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Nick Bedford‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to improve this introductory paragraph (to fit writing standards and grab the reader's attention)?

A clock is striking 4:00am at a psychiatric clinic. The darkness, the silence, and absence of people makes it look like a morgue. A young mental health professional is sitting in a cha...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Alexandro Chen‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Effective techniques for describing pain

I've noticed something in writing: it's difficult to convey pain, and even specific types of pain, to an audience who's comfortably sitting at home in an easy chair. I can hardly imagine pain unt...

3 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by ElizaWy‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What connotations do these character names confer?

I'm currently brooding over good character names for a novel I want to write. I was looking at some of the books I read recently, trying to understand why the authors picked the names they gave the...

0 answers  ·  posted 10y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How can a practical learner get up to speed on APA quickly?

I'd like to learn the APA style guide, so that, in addition to the fiction and general non-fiction I work on currently, I can start accepting academic editing jobs. However, I know very little abou...

0 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Neil‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is there a name for this kind of sentence structure?

I've seen this construction quite a bit, although only in the last five years or so. It's a transcription of a way of speaking, where the speaker is emphasizing something by using a verbal full sto...

1 answer  ·  posted 12y ago by Lauren Ipsum‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How should I use phrases such as "uh huh"?

I have seen various combinations of interjections (or "grunt words", as they are sometimes called) used in fictional dialogue, such as: uh huh (which I take for a yes) uh uh (for no) nuh uh (also ...

1 answer  ·  posted 12y ago by tcrosley‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What needs to be included in a corporate style guide?

What kinds of things need to be included in a corporate style guide that can't already be found in S&W, AP, Chicago Style, etc?

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by dddppp‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is emphasizing a point by underlining still appropriate?

Instinctively I find underlining for emphasis distracting and much prefer bold or italic. From my research it seems underlining is a carryover from typewriters that were incapable of italicizing o...

2 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by GollyJer‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is there an alternative to the common genre-system for classifying books?

When fiction is marketed, I often see them listed by genre, for e.g.: "fantasy", "science fiction", "mystery", "poetry", etc. Most bookstores and Web sites use essentially the same categories to cl...

1 answer  ·  posted 11y ago by Village‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to express in a better way? [closed]

Possible Duplicate: How to overcome the fact that I can't write? Normally I have good ideas to write, but when I come to writing those on paper it seems I don't have much vocabulary or g...

0 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Surjya Narayana Padhi‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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A tricky serial semi-colon

A serial comma is used to separate a list of items: For breakfast, we had ham, eggs, and toast. A serial semi-colon is used when items in the list have commas: For breakfast, we had ham, ...

3 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Lauren Ipsum‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Really Stuck: Writing Dialogue

I am currently working on my first novel so forgive me for making what is probably considered the mistake of a 'novice'. My novel is set in the present, however my antagonist has a history dating b...

2 answers  ·  posted 10y ago by KD Novels‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Tips for writing sentences like a native speaker

English isn't my native tongue, but I've been writing novels in English for a while. Most of the time, I can be aware of what's grammatically correct and what's not. But making sure that a sentence...

2 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by Alexandro Chen‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How can I convey that my viewpoint character is lying?

When writing in the first person, what is a good way to convey that the viewpoint character is lying, without saying so explicitly? My idea is this: "I am writing this as a record of what's be...

2 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Nathan C. Tresch‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What's the indent rule of poetry?

I've seen people indent their poems like below: Writing on wall It was just plane writing on wall I must have taken it a serious call She was on and off repeating same thing There wa...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by xzhu‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to fix awkward "sufficiently... that..." sentence structure?

I have written the following sentence, but I am dissatisfied with its construction. In particular, the that joining the two parts of the sentence reads somewhat awkwardly. Can anyone suggest a bett...

2 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Faheem Mitha‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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For Sci-Fi books, what is the purchasing split between regular and ebooks?

I can get the data for ALL books. But can anyone direct me to regular/ebook purchasing data broken down by genre (specifically sci-fi)?

0 answers  ·  posted 10y ago by dmm‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Ways for main character to influence world following their death

The main character of a story dies before the story itself ends. Nothing new here, you can keep a story interesting following their death. But I have an additional requirement: The dead main charac...

3 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Core Xii‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Sympathetic portrayal of an evil protagonist with good motivations

I'm contemplating writing about a character with good motivations whose actions would be considered evil. In short the story would be about a necromancer killing an entire nation so that he can bri...

1 answer  ·  posted 12y ago by Borgel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Sample Metaphor for Cycling [closed]

Can you please give me a sample metaphor for cycling, specially when pedalling uphill and sweating. Also, I'd like an example of a metaphor to describe the opposite situation: riding downhill, wit...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by xscape‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Legal ramifications for writing about fictional relationships with celebs

I’m thinking about developing a blog where the main character is fictional and has fictional relationships with well known celebrities and sports figures. Are there any legal ramifications for wri...

2 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by cbartsie‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Problems with past tenses in formal paper on a novel with MLA Format

I have been writing high school English paper on a novel in MLA format. Is there any rule about using past participle or past imperfect? Throughout the essay there have been many places that can ...

0 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How can I improve my written communication skills the soonest?

All. The biggest area I am working right now is to improve my written communications skills. It’s a tough skill to learn but a good one to have, since most of what we do is exchange email with our ...

4 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by user614‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What is the smallest amount of text that can be plagiarized?

Can the following be considered plagiarized? I am interested in finding out the limit of words one is allowed to use. Java is a programming platform that's used for developing computer applicat...

0 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by Noah‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Does this FAQ accurately convey the mission of DIY.SE?

The DIY stack exchange is currently trying to make our FAQ more useful to new users, and I wondered if some folks from this community could take a look and help us to define ourselves better. This...

1 answer  ·  posted 12y ago by Tester101‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How can I publish a translation of a book?

I'm in the process of translating a book (scientific publication) for private use. If I ever decide to publish it: what is the procedure? Who is the right person to ask for publishing rights and tr...

1 answer  ·  posted 12y ago by Lost in Translation‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Where can I find exercises to help me develop fictional writing techniques useful in narrative nonfiction?

I usually write explanatory nonfiction, but now I am interested in something more narrative--think Erik Larson or Rebecca Skloot, for example. I write clearly, and understand basic ideas about narr...

0 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Al C‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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In end user documentation, should screenshots come before or after the text that references them?

The end user documentation I'm writing makes use of screenshots (and partial screenshots) to show the user what I'm referring to in procedural instructions or conceptual explanations of the softwar...

2 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by Matthew Rodatus‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by Monica Cellio‭

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singular or plural for index entries

I am in the final stages of writing a book and currently I am preparing the index. Are there any rules whether index entries should be listed in singular or plural? Currently I have Markov chains...

2 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by jochen‭  ·  last activity 4mo ago by Herem1956‭

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Is it worth learning to touch type [closed]

Possible Duplicate: Is touch typing skill important for being a good writer? I'm curious about the great novelists, like Kerouac, thompson, hemmingway etc. The ones that had access to ty...

0 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Jacob‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to develop a story for a novel?

I am looking for some inspiration on where to start writing a novel. I have a general idea for a plot and characters, but I don't feel it's enough for sitting down and starting to write. It needs a...

3 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by daphshez‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is there a good project management software for writers?

I would like something in which I can set targets - like write/edit 10,000 words a week, set a final end date for the project, set mini targets, track any lag etc. The only PM software I've used i...

4 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Shantnu Tiwari‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is P.S. (Post Script) still useful in the age of email?

"Post script is usually written when a writer forgets to write something on the main body of the letter and wants to add on to what he had written on the letter." But in this age of email and word ...

4 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Mayank‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How do I express opinion informed by my beliefs without being hamfisted? [closed]

As authors, our influences can come from many places. Religion is definitely one of many influences on people's work. I believe a work should be a reflection of its author, yet religion can be real...

0 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Gabe Willard‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Does this paragraph make you want to keep reading?

Can you remember the last toy you ever bought? We do. Here at the St. Abattoir, London's largest toy store, your childhood is our business. We think of ourselves not as merely customer ser...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by user2325‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Does this convey that I recommend the anthology I'm reviewing?

Here's a snipped-up version of a review of an anthology I wrote a while back (full original review here). Most of the stories were pretty good, a few were superb, and there were a few poor ones. Fo...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by Standback‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Explaining that experience is far greater than official job title implies

Hopefully this meets the FAQ under the 'Non-fiction, technical' section. I work as a Graphic Designer, but I want to apply for a job as an Advertising Account Manager. While my title at my curren...

2 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Ryan‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Using abbreviations after in-text citations

I am writing an academic paper, specifically a Position Paper, using APA. According to the Purdue OWL webpage, to cite an organisation: "First citation: (Mothers Against Drunk Driving [MADD], 2000...

1 answer  ·  posted 11y ago by Karen‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Do books have to be written in sequence?

So can we write the interesting action bits first, then add in the in between stuff, that maybe needed to understand the story or characters, but isnt so exciting by itself? For example the intere...

3 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Shantnu Tiwari‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How do you write a formal email?

What is the web equivalent of formal letters? In this day and age, formal correspondence have all become digital, and it would be helpful to know the proper way. Oh, and please do highlight if the...

0 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Oxwivi‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to continue someone else's story gracefully, with fan-fiction?

I've been juggling some ideas for NaNoWriMo and one of them is a Doctor Who story. Now I've not read a great deal of fan fiction but I've never read any that I'd say that compares to the original, ...

1 answer  ·  posted 11y ago by Pureferret‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How can I improve my analytical writing for a standardized test?

I will be taking the GRE test, which is an exam for students from non-English speaking countries who want to go to the US for graduate study. The test basically tests your English ability and your ...

0 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by Dylan Zhu‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to obtain a thoughtful critique of a job application cover letter?

Sometimes, not always, when searching for my next position or project, I make an effort to write an interesting cover letter, one intended to convey images and passion, a story. I want it to be a ...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by DarenW‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Italicize part of a word in fiction?

I am wondering if I can or should take a bit of stylistic license and italicize just part of a word: He took a sharp turn back into a side street, and collided hard with something that sent him...

1 answer  ·  posted 12y ago by Tim Chaves‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How can I effectively invent a language?

I want to make a particular language that adapts to the story. And the language has to have x and y and e characteristics for example. Is there a protocol to follow on the process of making a lan...

5 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Joze‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is it ok to be autobiographical with a main character?

This question really comes down to a personal issue I've had present in my fiction. I'm still very new as far as being a writer is concerned. So a few (if not all) of my main characters seem to be ...

2 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by QuestionMarcs‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is it strange if a novel starts the first chapter without one of main characters?

I'm writing a novel with the following structure (I'm not very sure what's the technical term): Chapter One (based on the POV of Character C): C sees B for the first time Chapter Two (base...

3 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by Alexandro Chen‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭