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General Q&A about the craft of professional writing, editing, and publishing. Questions about all types of writing are welcome -- fiction, technical documentation, scholarly articles, poetry, scriptwriting, blogs, and more.

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Visual methods of plot development?

My 9 to 5 job is in an office, which has made me very adept at using flow charts and graphs to plan out my projects. Are there any writing methods which employ charts, graphs, or other visual med...

4 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by pblock‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How can I get my students to better integrate their sources into their writing?

A common problem I observe in student papers the use of source material in a sequential as opposed to an integrated fashion. For example, the first paragraph will be based on source 1, the secon...

1 answer  ·  posted 11y ago by DQdlM‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Background speech with foreground dialogue

A few days ago, I stumbled upon an issue of the type; meaning I had two characters talking between themselves and another character talking in the background; actually delivering a speech. What th...

2 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by Jerry‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to assure your plot isn't a carbon copy of another story?

In what case is it justifiable for your own story to differentiate its plot from another, similar plot? For instance, I'm writing a story with a serial killer who whose motive sounds akin to the Ji...

1 answer  ·  posted 11y ago by Chris Okyen‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Is it strange if a novel starts the first chapter without one of main characters?

I'm writing a novel with the following structure (I'm not very sure what's the technical term): Chapter One (based on the POV of Character C): C sees B for the first time Chapter Two (base...

3 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by Alexandro Chen‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to come up with a good title?

I'm done with my first novel, and I'm about to start writing to agents/publishers. The only detail I don't have yet is a good title! I have a couple of ideas but both suck. I had the illusion that...

2 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by ggambett‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Does writing in a certain mood change how a writer writes?

I'm not sure if this is right for this part of Stackexchange, but since there is no psychology section, here we go: I'm currently writing the same short story several times with the intention of c...

2 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by Throsby‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to format dialogue with an embedded long monologue

I use the following formats for dialogues: dialogue dialogue - describing action (if any) dialogue - describing action (if any) - more dialogue (if any) There is a chapter in my book that is m...

2 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by Psicofrenia‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What is the term for an accessible character that knows nothing?

In a lot of books, movies, or TV shows, there will be a character that knows little to nothing about the subject at hand. Most cop shows and medical shows will have someone who doesn't know very si...

2 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by Jeff‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Placing similes at the beginning and at the end of a sentence

Would the following sentences have different effects on the reader? He washed his hands thoroughly, like a surgeon after an operation. Like a surgeon after an operation, he washed his hand...

2 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by Alexandro Chen‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Maintaining the consistency of voice and spontaneity throughout a piece

So straight to it, I don't write very long pieces. Usually poetry or flash fiction and a smattering of short stories whenever it needs to be longer, though I have aspirations (mostly just dreams) ...

1 answer  ·  posted 11y ago by Jeremy‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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think, I think, I don't think

I use "think", "I think" and "I don't think" in my writing a lot. Can you suggest a few ways to reduce it and few alternative ways of saying the same thing? Look at the below sentences I have writ...

2 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by user43286‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How do I organize a paragraph that lists several steps after an introduction?

I have a paragraph like below: A hypothetical solution is like this: first, we can use a table to record entries. These entries are imported from a library. . ..... Basically, this paragraph ...

1 answer  ·  posted 11y ago by misteryes‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to better describe "jet-black (pitch-black) darkness"?

I'm trying my hand at translating a few Korean literary texts into English. Something I come across often while translating is the phrasing "jet-black(/pitch-black) eyes(/night/darkness)" which des...

4 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by Soulz‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Dream analysis research

I am currently writing a short story/novella. This piece of fiction describes a child who has vivid dreams. His dreamworld starts to blend with the real world by him being able to manipulate his dr...

2 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by Catharsis‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Is it correct to use verbs like "sighed" and "laughed" as dialogue tags?

In other words, is it correct to write something like this: "Oh," he laughed. "Sorry, I'm not sure what's with me today." (Every time I see something like this, I think: "How is this peson la...

1 answer  ·  posted 11y ago by Alexandro Chen‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How specific should I be when outlining the plot?

One problem I often run into when trying to make a general outline of the plot for a story is how specific I am in the descriptions of events. Generally, this happens when I have written a portion ...

2 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by JMcAfreak‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Demo data in screenshots! What are the best practice?

My question is related to best practices of making screenshots for end-user documentation. Particularly, is there universal information for filling in forms in the software and after that making sc...

1 answer  ·  posted 11y ago by Yuliya Drygybka‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Does the following piece have too much dry narration (mundane tasks, moving about)?

Tsuki woke up to the morning sun that entered through the window. She yawned and sat on the side of the bed, rubbing her eyes. The clock on the wall said half past ten. She brushed her teeth...

2 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by Alexandro Chen‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How should I format a non fiction book with Scrivener?

I have written mainly novels in Scrivener, and am now thinking of writing a small non-fiction work (which I will self publish). When writing a novel, you just keep typing til you reach the end, bu...

1 answer  ·  posted 11y ago by Shantnu Tiwari‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What type of writing would this fall under?

Would this be considered prose, or poetry? The reason I ask is because someone had told me that I should submit it to a magazine but I don't know what kind, if any would look at it. I write it abou...

1 answer  ·  posted 11y ago by Lokiie1984‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What constitutes historical fantasy?

I'm writing a trilogy set 80% in Italy and 20% in other European countries. Each novel incorporates real historical characters and fantasy elements (a magical object, real/imagined symbols, clairse...

2 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by Tessa Bagatto‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How can one plan elaborate crimes for fiction without getting into trouble?

The crime of conspiracy is a limitation on free speech in the united states. Merely talking about, in fine detail, a crime can get one charged with conspiracy. It is slightly more complicated than...

1 answer  ·  posted 11y ago by CQM‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How can I convey dates (with ordering) for events happening under different dating systems, e.g. a Sci-Fi story spread over the galaxy?

So I want to write a Sci-Fi where humans have spread across the solar system and into the galaxy. There are multiple stories going across at several different times. E.g.: Aliens attack Pluto 3 w...

2 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by Shantnu Tiwari‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to include photos in my Scrivener book?

I am creating a practical guide book with images. I am using Scrivener. I need to include images into the text, but I will then pass over my draft to a layout designer to layout out the project in ...

1 answer  ·  posted 11y ago by Andrew Welch‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What is the correct way to write a fractional number in a formal letter?

If I'm talking about a length of time in a cover letter, let's say 5.5 years, what would be the correct way to write this? five-and-a-half years 5-1/2 years 5.5 years

1 answer  ·  posted 11y ago by bernk‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Effective techniques for describing pain

I've noticed something in writing: it's difficult to convey pain, and even specific types of pain, to an audience who's comfortably sitting at home in an easy chair. I can hardly imagine pain unt...

3 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by ElizaWy‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to tell or retell basic character and setting information in a series?

I am writing a short children's novel and I want to expand this into a series made of several short novels. I intend to write the whole series at once so that the internal universe is consistent an...

2 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by Village‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Tips for writing sentences like a native speaker

English isn't my native tongue, but I've been writing novels in English for a while. Most of the time, I can be aware of what's grammatically correct and what's not. But making sure that a sentence...

2 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by Alexandro Chen‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How should I introduce new and complex technologies or tools?

I'm writing a Science Fiction book. While this book doesn't push reality very far, there are some new technologies and tools that I have added. One tool is used more frequently than all the others,...

4 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by JMcAfreak‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How is parallel construction viewed in literature?

I wrote a "take-off" on a French song using a technique that I believe is called "parallel construction." https://french.stackexchange.com/questions/6041/can-rustique-be-used-as-a-form-of-self-dep...

1 answer  ·  posted 11y ago by Tom Au‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How likely is the "five consecutive word rule" to detect "random," as opposed to intentional plagiarism?

I refer to the old fable that if you set enough monkeys at enough keyboards for a long enough period of time, they will (through random typing), reproduce the "Complete Works of Shakespeare," or an...

2 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by Tom Au‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Is a glossary needed in a novel?

Is a glossary needed in a translated-novel? or I would only need to put the translation of the native words under the brackets?

2 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by rusticmystic‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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1st person story, but the main character will die in the end and some of the story needs to be told after his death. How to solve this problem?

I personally like to read stories told by the the main character, it's more "alive" to me. But the problem is that my character will die and some of the story will need to be told afterwards. Maybe...

2 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by Derfder‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Comma between the following clauses in AP Style?

The AP style says that a comma is not needed between two clauses that have the same subject. However, it would become ambiguous if I removed the comma fromt the following: When you walk straigh...

1 answer  ·  posted 11y ago by Noah‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What is the correct word/term that needs to be before the names of the maker of the project?

I am doing a project with one other person, we have finished the project and we are working on a cover page. We are not sure what to write out before our names, we have thought of a couple of opti...

1 answer  ·  posted 11y ago by Belgi‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Overuse of bullet points

I collaborate with someone who insists on making every sentence (or two) in a business document into a bullet point, by prefacing it with a bullet. This is typically done across a multi-page docu...

1 answer  ·  posted 11y ago by Conor‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Iambic pentameter: how do you use words with 'secondary stressed' syllables?

I'm trying to create textbook-perfect iambic pentameter. I may be wrong in my assumption of there being such a thing as a 'secondary stressed syllable', but in the word 'poetry', the rhythm of it ...

3 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to tell if my story is finished, or needs more?

Slightly obtuse title, let me elaborate. I'm writing my first screenplay, and I'm trying to keep it simple while making it simultaneously wonderful. It's just a rom-com. But as I write and modify...

1 answer  ·  posted 11y ago by temporary_user_name‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What makes good writing software? [closed]

I'm developing a writing app and I'm interested to know what features would be most appreciated for such a thing. I am most interested in writing versus editing, tooling versus immersion, organizi...

1 answer  ·  posted 12y ago by Sorin Comanescu‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Proper use of the "historical present tense"

I am thinking of employing the historical present tense in a first-person narrative (to achieve a greater level of immediacy). The problem is that I am telling the story in a non-linear manner, i.e...

2 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Cliff Hangerson Page‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Flashback or dream as a means of hinting at more going on than meets the eye

I plan to use a dream or flashback as a way to show the reader the story has more going on behind the scenes. As well to sprinkle in a little of my main characters back-story. I haven't written i...

1 answer  ·  posted 12y ago by Lokiie1984‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How do I cite well known historical works?

If I'm writing a paper that uses well known historical sources, how would I cite them? Specifically, I'm referring to the United States Constitution and a speech delivered by Frederick Douglass. ...

1 answer  ·  posted 12y ago by Moshe‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Punctuation and capitalisation in poetry [closed]

I'm writing a poem entirely without commas, periods, colons, dashes, emdashes, etc. However, near the end of the poem I name a city and I want to capitalise it. On one hand, I think it would be j...

1 answer  ·  posted 11y ago by JAM‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to write from the middle?

My biggest problem as a writer is that I always get inspired and then start writing from the middle, in particular scenes or moments which I think will be crucial. Climaxes. These scenes turn out...

4 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by Alexander Nikolas Gruber‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to keep the reader engaged in a novel where "not much happens"?

(Hope I don't get an answer like this). I'm writing a novel where "not much happens," instead, it focuses on things that could happen. In other words, the protagonist does not directly experience...

1 answer  ·  posted 12y ago by Alexandro Chen‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Resource for generic plot hooks?

I'm in a long and painful recovery from many years of writer's block. Coming up with even quite simple story ideas costs me unreasonable amount of effort. Sometimes inspiration is generous and I'm ...

1 answer  ·  posted 12y ago by SF.‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Should I embrace or avoid memes(pictures) when blogging?

I write on a fairly low traffic blog. One thing I've been seeing some of around the internet are blog posts which use meme pictures(example picture. It seems like an interesting approach to me. I'm...

1 answer  ·  posted 12y ago by Earlz‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Gadgets that make the world/story broken

Every so often I see a nice piece of fiction where its author adds something (to save the plot, or to make it interesting, whatever) that makes the story broken (usually it makes the world, setting...

2 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by dtldarek‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What is the difference between "creative writing" and "fiction writing"?

My college offers many writing courses. I notice, one course is called "Creative Writing" and another is called "Fiction Writing". What is the difference between creative writing and fiction writing?

1 answer  ·  posted 12y ago by Village‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭