Communities

Writing
Writing
Codidact Meta
Codidact Meta
The Great Outdoors
The Great Outdoors
Photography & Video
Photography & Video
Scientific Speculation
Scientific Speculation
Cooking
Cooking
Electrical Engineering
Electrical Engineering
Judaism
Judaism
Languages & Linguistics
Languages & Linguistics
Software Development
Software Development
Mathematics
Mathematics
Christianity
Christianity
Code Golf
Code Golf
Music
Music
Physics
Physics
Linux Systems
Linux Systems
Power Users
Power Users
Tabletop RPGs
Tabletop RPGs
Community Proposals
Community Proposals
tag:snake search within a tag
answers:0 unanswered questions
user:xxxx search by author id
score:0.5 posts with 0.5+ score
"snake oil" exact phrase
votes:4 posts with 4+ votes
created:<1w created < 1 week ago
post_type:xxxx type of post
Search help
Notifications
Mark all as read See all your notifications »
Q&A

General Q&A about the craft of professional writing, editing, and publishing. Questions about all types of writing are welcome -- fiction, technical documentation, scholarly articles, poetry, scriptwriting, blogs, and more.

Filters (None)
60%
+1 −0
My book doesn't seem to fall into a clear genre

What genre best describes my novel about the life of a character whose entirely fictional history includes many realistically humorous interludes as well as some serious, even tragic incidents? It ...

1 answer  ·  posted 8y ago by topcol‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

50%
+0 −0
Restrictions On Producing A Playscript

So the annual play at my university is coming up and i wanted it to be on a novel i recently read. I'm ready to adopt it but the thing is that i wanted to know if i might encounter any trouble with...

1 answer  ·  posted 8y ago by The Man‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

50%
+0 −0
Typo correction when citing an external source

Good evening, I'm in the process of writing a small research paper for my college and im facing the following dilemma. One of my sources has a typo. More specifically instead of the word "Christi...

2 answers  ·  posted 8y ago by Meletis‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

50%
+0 −0
As a writer, should I be upset because I couldn't think of an idea?

I've just been struggling recently with this doubt that I could never think of ideas I've seen written on my own. If that sounds confusing to you, you aren't the only one. Of course, I could sit ...

2 answers  ·  posted 8y ago by White S.‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
Publishing images of paintings

My wife and I are working on a book that will contain photographs of paintings that were exhibited, with owner permission, in shows hung by wife or obtained from other photographs. All of the works...

1 answer  ·  posted 8y ago by A Smith‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
Appropriate use of outdated vocabulary and terms?

I'm in the process of planning a story right now, without the intention of sharing it it with others, but I would like it to be comprehensible if I do. It's set in the 1880s and is formatted like a...

1 answer  ·  posted 8y ago by Wendigo King‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

50%
+0 −0
When to not using SI symbols for units?

In the book What If?, the author usually write the unit as kilometer, atmosphere, megawatt instead of km, atm, MW. However he does use the symbols in the drawings: In one line both mm and millim...

0 answers  ·  posted 8y ago by Ooker‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

50%
+0 −0
How to write a character misinterpreting Four Candles as Fork Handles

English is full of homophones that can cause confusion when speaking, but if the two similar sounding words are spelled differently they can be clarified as soon as they are written down. However, ...

1 answer  ·  posted 8y ago by Mike.C.Ford‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
What are "good" writing habits?

I always read that good writers shouldn't use similitudes and metaphors. Also, a writer shouldn't use too many descriptions. Then, I read Raymond Chandler and my little stupid world of securities w...

2 answers  ·  posted 8y ago by Vito‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
How do I write a story within a story?

How can a protagonist, being a writer himself, share a full short story he has written with the readers within a short story? What are the techniques he can use to separate the frame story from th...

2 answers  ·  posted 8y ago by user21564‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

50%
+0 −0
Description of "Unimportant" Details

People advise to keep description to a minimum, or to make it worthwhile to the audience. I'm talking about description that isn't really necessary/important to the plot but is necessary/important ...

2 answers  ·  posted 8y ago by Deus Ex Machina‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

50%
+0 −0
Does it matter which literary agents one contacts first?

Novelists seeking a literary agent's representation are advised to prepare a long list of carefully chosen agents (e.g. genre matches are important), but to only contact a few at a time. The respon...

1 answer  ·  posted 8y ago by J.G.‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
Order of body paragraphs/examples in essay writing

Short version: In an essay that aims to persuade and leave an impact on the reader (which also involves making it flow logically), is it more effective to have the larger scale societal example in ...

0 answers  ·  posted 8y ago by K-Feldspar‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

50%
+0 −0
Could I have a writing phobia?

This question rather stems from my last question about inspiration vs copying from another authors work. While the suggestions I got there haven't completed resolved my issues and doubts, they have...

3 answers  ·  posted 8y ago by White S.‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

50%
+0 −0
How to indicate that another point is mentioned withou explicitly saying that?

In the email I'm writing there are three separate points. The last two ones are not so long so that each of them can fit in a single paragraph. However, the first one is needed to be split into two...

1 answer  ·  posted 8y ago by Ooker‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

50%
+0 −0
Am I copying an idea too closely?

I guess this is a question about inspiration versus copying. I recently came across a story that really gripped me both with the inspiration for an idea and at the same time a doubt I could ever wr...

2 answers  ·  posted 8y ago by White S.‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

50%
+0 −0
How do I contrast the thought processes of different characters in one scene?

I have two characters, Alice and Bob. They have just met and each is trying to deceive the other. But their thought processes and the nature of their deceptions are very different from one anothe...

3 answers  ·  posted 8y ago by Kevin‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

50%
+0 −0
Advice on writing horror? [closed]

Can you guys give a novice writer some advice on how to write good, frightening horror? I'm think more short story than novel, but anything that can give readers the creeps. I want to avoid being t...

3 answers  ·  posted 8y ago by Malhar Khushu‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

50%
+0 −0
How does one evaluate his own writing ability?

I'm considering working in writing. I'd like to save myself some time in case I'm not up for the job. How do I go about evaluating myself as a professional writer? I was going to ask for a peer ...

1 answer  ·  posted 8y ago by user6035379‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
Dialogue and action question

I am currently working on a novel. currently two girls are the only active characters. I am curious if I need to separate the dialogue and action when one character is acting and another is actin...

1 answer  ·  posted 8y ago by Connor‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
Which Bullet Points to Use First Under Different List Nesting Styles

My work presents proposals with information divided by numbered headings. Under these headings, the technical writers use a variety of paragraphs, numbered indentations, and indented bullet points....

1 answer  ·  posted 8y ago by C Aaron N‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
Would anyone want to read a book about my life? [closed]

I got the idea to write a book about my life story from my mother. At first I thought who would want to read about my life, then I thought back on my life and actually thought wow I have been thru ...

0 answers  ·  posted 8y ago by Stoni Katarina Matthews‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
Where can I post my story, but keep the formatting?

My friend and I are working on a story that we want to publish and share on the internet (kind of like what FictionPress does), but we have some formatting worked into our story that we would like ...

0 answers  ·  posted 8y ago by Cyberson‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
Bibliography/Citation when writing a book

When writing a book, how does bibliography work? Can I just list all the resources used at the end in a "Bibliography" section? If so, do I need to put the exact pages that I used? Also, do I nee...

1 answer  ·  posted 8y ago by Dave‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
Help with writing feedback [closed]

I needed some help with feedback with my writing. I am new to writing and would really appreciate if someone can read it and provide feedback. Any kind of tips and tricks or suggestion are welcome....

0 answers  ·  posted 8y ago by Travel Dreams‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
Labyrinth: old freeware to organise characters and plot

I found this freeware app, labytrinth, years ago. It allowed to create elements (characters, places, objects, etc) and detail information about them. Then you could drag these elements into a wide ...

0 answers  ·  posted 8y ago by SC for reinstatement of Monica‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

50%
+0 −0
When to evaluate whether your book will sell?

For a new guidebook project (freelancing in IT) I wonder at which point I should evaluate the idea. I see these possibilities: Create a website with a newsletter subscription form and see if peop...

1 answer  ·  posted 8y ago by Zsolt Szilagy‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

50%
+0 −0
Reported speech in a dialogue

I suppose this is not really advisable but how do you report speech in a conversation with another person? Should standard reported speech rules apply or do I treat it as direct speech? "My home...

1 answer  ·  posted 8y ago by newtowriting‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

50%
+0 −0
How can I prevent the ends of my chapters from feeling forced?

Background I've found that at the end of a lot of my chapters, the endings feel quite forced and abrupt. This is because I don't know where to go, I've done what I need to do. For example: Exc...

1 answer  ·  posted 8y ago by Daniel Cann‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
Has anyone attempted to automate some of the editing process? Specifically to style everyday text towards poetry? [closed]

Some translations surpass the original texts, thanks to the translator. Can a text become more poetic by being re-written into more beautiful language by an open-source algorithm? The algorithm co...

0 answers  ·  posted 8y ago by J M N‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
Best Resources for Improving your craft?

The number one reason I unsubscribe from writer's newsletters is negative email headlines like Stop Procrastinating and Finally, You Can Finish Your Novel and 10 tips to focus better and finish in ...

2 answers  ·  posted 8y ago by Jane Smith‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

50%
+0 −0
Stripping the Main Character's Plot Armour?

I have a main character, I'm attempting to disguise this fact. But it is tricky. Out of nowhere, the character rises up as a successful military leader. The events that lead up to that are plausibl...

2 answers  ·  posted 8y ago by J. Doe‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

50%
+0 −0
Splicing/Mixing Scenes

Remember the end of the Godfather, where they spliced all the different assassinations with the christening? Or any film with good cutting, where they swap between different characters and what the...

1 answer  ·  posted 8y ago by J. Doe‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
There's an actor with my lead character's name - how big a problem is this going to be?

I began work A Long Time Ago(tm) on this particular book and only took it up again about eighteen months ago. Back in 2007, I checked around but didn't see anybody of note with the name of my prota...

3 answers  ·  posted 8y ago by Quin Benson‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
Making People Unsure which Characters will Survive

I hope this isn't too general. I wanted to ask for advice on making it unclear which characters will survive to the end. The first arc of the story involves a lot of characters, more than 12, but o...

5 answers  ·  posted 8y ago by J. Doe‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
What's the best way to cite non-fiction in fiction?

I'm reading a (proposed) novel for a friend, and they've used large chunks (as in, full paragraphs verbatim) from online sources within their text, usually sourcing from encyclopedias. The way they...

0 answers  ·  posted 8y ago by Frankie‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

50%
+0 −0
Multiple continues references in Microsoft office word 2013

I'm writing a paper for IEEE using Microsoft office Word 2013. I want to use dynamic reference which is available in this version of Word. In a place of my article the references are similar to: ...

1 answer  ·  posted 8y ago by Babak.Abad‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

50%
+0 −0
What should be done if there is a dispute of opinions within the editorial team?

In a magazine where an individual author's name is not published with the article, it seems obvious to me that the article can be presumed to reflect the consensus of the entire editorial team on w...

2 answers  ·  posted 8y ago by Dvij Mankad‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

50%
+0 −0
Term for writing mostly in first-person, but switching to third-person for things the POV doesn't yet know?

What's the term or name of the literary device/technique employed when a novel is mostly written in first person from the protagonist's view, but events as yet unknown to the character are written ...

3 answers  ·  posted 8y ago by Tony‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

50%
+0 −0
How do you avoid unnatural sounding language?

I am not asking you to tell me to keep my sentences less than 20 words long because I am determined to write some really long sentences. What I want to know is how to avoid sounding unnatural. Do I...

1 answer  ·  posted 8y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
Where can I publish politically incorrect writing?

Some writings offend the current political mainstream, because they contradict the prevailing opinions and propose different values. Where can such writing be published? Samples of writing are htt...

0 answers  ·  posted 8y ago by user21795‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

50%
+0 −0
Editing an Anthology or Compilation

I'm interested in putting together an anthology --a work containing some original material, but also lengthy excerpts and/or full text of previously published material by other authors, from a vari...

1 answer  ·  posted 8y ago by Chris Sunami‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

50%
+0 −0
Should I follow my instinct or public demand when writing a story?

What would you do if you faced the same dilemma Sir Arthur Conan Doyle faced when he actually wanted to end "Sherlock Holmes" which was at it's peak of popularity with the public? What would you do...

5 answers  ·  posted 8y ago by srini‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

50%
+0 −0
Chapters - Writing Order

I, like most writers, have a number of ideas about my current work in progress. I know how some chapters in the story will play out almost precisely (the ending / final chapter, for example) and h...

4 answers  ·  posted 8y ago by M.Y. David‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

50%
+0 −0
Runbook template example?

I have been searching for a Runbook / Operations Guide example and can't seem to find a useful one for my company. The current runbook they handed me contains use cases and requirements, which I k...

2 answers  ·  posted 8y ago by Heather J‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

50%
+0 −0
How to replace "and/or" in sentences with multiple terms?

When writing a legal document, what is the proper way to replace and/or in a list with more than two terms to remove ambiguity? For example, if I just have two terms: deliver apples and/or ora...

1 answer  ·  posted 8y ago by Antonio O.‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
Does it make sense to set a sword & sorcery fantasy in a post-apocalyptic world on Earth?

Fantasy worlds are usually set in a separate world, time, and space from our own. Many are set in an alternate world and dimension. They feature medieval-like setting and technology. Yet some fant...

1 answer  ·  posted 8y ago by FraEnrico‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
Translating from mind to paper

I've had a story developing inside my head for years (literally about 5 or 6 years now) but every time I try to put that story onto paper it never turns out how I wanted it. It feels like this is m...

2 answers  ·  posted 8y ago by Chase Hughes‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
How can one not let their voice show through in all the characters?

I was critiquing a friend's novel and I noticed that all the characters seem to have the voice of my friend. Speech fillers, vocabulary, sentence structure all seems the same throughout. How c...

4 answers  ·  posted 8y ago by AJL‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

50%
+0 −0
How do I keep a major emotional upheaval from seeming artificial and abrupt?

I'm writing a short story. In it, someone hires a professional assassin to kill a young woman. While the killer is investigating his target he unknowingly starts having feelings for her but he only...

1 answer  ·  posted 8y ago by Loupax‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭