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General Q&A about the craft of professional writing, editing, and publishing. Questions about all types of writing are welcome -- fiction, technical documentation, scholarly articles, poetry, scriptwriting, blogs, and more.

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Picking a place to start (In media res)

I'm about to start a new story, and I feel it would be better if I started in media res. (aka at some point in the middle.) I know this is a fairly common style used to hook readers into the story ...

4 answers  ·  posted 9y ago by A.lancaster‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What defines a Fairy Tale versus typical Fantasy?

My second-grader has been asked to write a "fairy tale." We are both clueless about what makes a story a "fairy tale" different from a fantasy story. Is there some special, defining element to a fa...

3 answers  ·  posted 9y ago by SnappingShrimp‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Why would an agent request an exclusive submission?

I understand why publishers often ask for exclusive submissions. They're counting on a story that has been submitted to them to be available for them to purchase if they decide they like it and it...

1 answer  ·  posted 9y ago by DoWhileNot‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Describing laughter in dialogue?

I'm having a problem that is not addressed by The Chicago Manual of Style or the AP Style Guide I have access to: How does a writer express laughter in fiction? I have seen no consistent answer. I...

3 answers  ·  posted 9y ago by Stu W‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Forming a strong relationship between 2 characters

How can one organically develop a strong relationship (father-son, to be precise) between 2 strangers over the course of a novel without making it seem contrived?

3 answers  ·  posted 9y ago by Deau X. Machinus‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Documenting a Mongo Collection Field

While writing some documentation I stumbled upon the need to describe the location of a field in a Mongo Collection on one of our corporate servers. After spending a bit of time on this I arrived ...

0 answers  ·  posted 9y ago by Shanimal‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What to avoid when writing a villain? [closed]

The villain so far has only appeared in two chapters. However now he's making a return in a chapter which is mostly about him, his actions and his past. Now. What are mistakes I should avoid when w...

1 answer  ·  posted 9y ago by DarkYagami‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to make a non-action-packed scenes enjoyable

The specific example that I was thinking of is writing about people traveling through a snow-storm. I tried to write one, and I found myself using phrases like, "The blasting wind blew against thei...

0 answers  ·  posted 9y ago by SpiralStudios‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Different types of "Flashbacks"

In a novel, particurlarly fiction, what are the basic ways to reveal something that happened in the past? What ways, (flashback, protagonist telling, etc.) are the most used and most effective? Spe...

1 answer  ·  posted 9y ago by SpiralStudios‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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IRC for Creative Writers

Are there any 'active' irc channels designed for writers? I say active, because I've found a couple channels, bit they were all empty.

0 answers  ·  posted 9y ago by user1545‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How can a screenplay writer learn to write a novel?

I am the sort of person that is really great at coming up with amazing ideas, plot-lines, worlds, etc. for stories, but I'm not so good at putting them to paper - at least not in a novel. I'm reall...

2 answers  ·  posted 9y ago by Praefervidus‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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should I put the reference number after the dot or after a space? [closed]

I am writing my thesis. and I need to know the correct way of putting the reference. for example: this is a sentence taken from someone [2]. this is a sentence taken from someone[2]. ...

0 answers  ·  posted 9y ago by sarah‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Feature film and finding a co-writer

I've written a few scripts for film, but think I need to collaborate with someone. I always run out of ideas. Where would I find a co-writer?

0 answers  ·  posted 9y ago by James Kearney‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Lots of confusion over which story to write [closed]

I'm Chetan. I won't say I'm a good writer, but I'm on the journey of becoming one. Okay here's the problem: I have a story in my mind and I really want to write it. But, I'm thinking of starting wi...

3 answers  ·  posted 9y ago by chetan kumar‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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I have a race of winged characters in my story, but I'm struggling as to how and why? [closed]

I know why; they're cool, and they have a deep yearning to be free and with the air, which'll be a major theme in the story. But... I don't know how to explain their wings. I don't want them to be ...

0 answers  ·  posted 9y ago by Gilbert Beilschmidt‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to punctuate the synonym to a word or phrase? [closed]

I have a sentence: ... to further everyones agenda; revenge. Is this the correct punctuation? Or should the semicolon simply be a comma? I know this is an incredibly dumb question and I should kn...

0 answers  ·  posted 9y ago by user16465‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Microsoft Book Pages [closed]

I use Microsoft Word to write stories then I send it to a publisher. But, I want to know how many pages would the book version would be because I want to make long stories and/or books.

0 answers  ·  posted 9y ago by Reshad Sharif‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Submitting new work to another publisher while first deal is pending

A family member has had a verbal offer of publication for a book (a collection of pieces), though no contract has been signed yet and the printed book is probably quite a ways off. If all goes well...

0 answers  ·  posted 9y ago by Chelonian‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to write a death scene without making it overdramatic?

Okay. In the story there's a flashback where one of the main protagonists loses his best friend in a battle where he was the only survivor. His best friend is a important character and, because of ...

2 answers  ·  posted 9y ago by DarkYagami‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How do I write sexual tension between two characters?

So. This is one of my first projects, so I have to ask this. The story takes place in a dystopian future, where a young man and a young woman meet each other. They then try to overthrow the tyranni...

5 answers  ·  posted 9y ago by DarkYagami‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How do I structure an essay into a thesis statement and three points in three paragraphs? -this is not a school homework [closed]

I'm writing an essay but I struggle with thesis statements and paragraphs. My teacher wants my thesis to be significant, specific, single, and supportable. I often know what I want to write, but st...

0 answers  ·  posted 9y ago by Ben ‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Is it hard for a foreigner to publish in English?

I'm from Brazil and I plan to write my first book. I'm thinking about writing it in English, because then it could be published worldwide (I know, dreams). The problem is that I don't know if it wo...

1 answer  ·  posted 9y ago by JulianoSt‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Plural of single letter variables

Excuse me if I am on the wrong StackExchange site. I write about Physics in English and typeset that with LaTeX. So I have a variable c, and there are two of them in the same expression. I want to...

1 answer  ·  posted 9y ago by Martin Ueding‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Attracting and retaining volunteers to edit technical doc for open source projects

I volunteer as an editor for the Mozilla Developer Network (MDN), an organization that creates free open source software such as the Firefox browser. MDN has a large number of technical topics awai...

0 answers  ·  posted 9y ago by rolfedh‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How do I index an author who published with and without middle initial?

How do I index an author who published articles with and without middle initial? For example, I cite an author who published as J. Bloggs, An important paper, Some Journal, 1993 and J. Z. Bloggs...

0 answers  ·  posted 9y ago by user1362373‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What aspects of written dialogue are important when giving characters a unique voice?

I have a project that I am working on in which I need to write quite a few fictional informal email correspondences between pairs of characters. I am not using these characters in any other context...

3 answers  ·  posted 9y ago by VoicingMyConcerns‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to format the transcript of a telephonic conversation for email? [closed]

What is the usual and customary way to write an e-mail to my lead for the telephonic conversation that I had with client or consultant? I need a formal format for the minutes of a conversation that...

0 answers  ·  posted 9y ago by shishir‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How can I avoid using the first person in a report when directly referring to work and experiences I have had?

I have been asked to write a report on the company I am working at during a placement from University (I am on an engineering programme). There was not much guidance given on what the content of th...

0 answers  ·  posted 9y ago by Matthew Wilkins‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Use of the Oxford comma

The oxford comma is the second comma in the sentence I like the colors red, white, and blue. Every grammar textbook I've ever seen, as well as the major style guides, feels that this is "proper" de...

0 answers  ·  posted 9y ago by Stu W‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What is the significance of the owl with respect to writing?

I've seen 'owl' mentioned many times in the context of writing. Some libraries have an 'owl's nest', some universities have writing workshops by the same name. If you google 'owl writing' you wil...

0 answers  ·  posted 9y ago by horse hair‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Influence of The Protagonist's Birthday [closed]

I was writing up my story and i wanted to know how much should the Protagonist's Birthday be part of the story. I have seen many stories in books,movies and games in where birthdays play very impor...

0 answers  ·  posted 9y ago by John Overcraft‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Which year to cite reference as?

In a nonfiction snippet I'm writing about metrology, specifically the term micron being used in reference to the unit multiple micrometre (AmE: micrometer) I need to cite Resolution 7 of the 13th C...

0 answers  ·  posted 9y ago by SarahofGaia‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How do you know if your writing can become a story?

Hope this is the right forum to be asking a question! I have been writing every since I can remember, my stories, writings, letters, poems, lessons and emotions were captured from as young as 14,...

0 answers  ·  posted 9y ago by Meds‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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"Proposed Method" in Academic Paper

Is it okay to use the term "proposed method" in academic paper if I already done implementing the method? Or what phrase I can replace to this?

0 answers  ·  posted 9y ago by mich‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Self publishing a collection of poems

I have written four poems and will keep writing more. How many should I put under one collection, and around how many pages should it be? Any ideas on how I should go about the self publication pro...

0 answers  ·  posted 9y ago by Malhar Khushu‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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I'm shy to let my friends read my books

All the books I have wrote, I've always been shy to show my friends. I don't want them to think poorly of me with what I write. Any advice that could help me?

2 answers  ·  posted 9y ago by Alyssa Bynum‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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In a formal writing, does having a paragraph rewritten by another person make the style change noticablely?

I am writing a personal statement to apply to a grad school. At first, I thought that because the role of this statement is to show an image of me as a person, using the tone I usually use when blo...

2 answers  ·  posted 9y ago by Ooker‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Complicated names - spelling question based on a character hearing the name said

I'm writing a first person story and the main character will hear a number of odd names said. The odd names will be put into Google and her spelling will be corrected, but I was wondering how to ha...

0 answers  ·  posted 9y ago by hlh3406‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Show Don't Tell [closed]

How would you use "Show Don't Tell" imagery to portray a person who is watching something (an encounter) that makes him 'freeze' in his spot? All I can think of is: He is frozen in his spot as he w...

0 answers  ·  posted 9y ago by J. Doe‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What is the fine line between "confidence" and "presumption"? [closed]

I am about to apply to a grad school, and I have prepare the SOP for it (think it like a cover letter to apply to a job). I know the rule: show what I've got, not tell how I think I'm cool. I've tr...

1 answer  ·  posted 9y ago by Ooker‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Tools to help me write SOPs for graduate school

I am in the process of applying to several graduate school, so I need to write several Statements of Purpose (SOP). English is not my first language and my writing skills are average at best. Are t...

1 answer  ·  posted 9y ago by harinsa‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How can I make my writing more interesting?

For some reason my writing is really boring. I think its because I write in the character's point of view and I suck at that. How can I fix this?

0 answers  ·  posted 9y ago by Erikku‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Resources for learning how to craft plots

The main problem for someone moving from non-fiction to fiction is the development of a plot. It is especially frustrating to someone who already knows how to string words together and "write well"...

0 answers  ·  posted 9y ago by JDługosz‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Character development and suspense [closed]

How does/can proper character development add to the suspense felt in the reader?

0 answers  ·  posted 9y ago by McKenzie Moon Mester‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Should I have my work edited by a freelance editor before seeking publication?

I have a friend who is a freelance editor and I was planning on employing her to look over my novel before shopping it out to publishers. However, I don't know if publishers like this or not. Do t...

0 answers  ·  posted 9y ago by user2859458‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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copyright issues and permissions

I am a children's book illustrator. I am hired to illustrate a series of books by the author. The first book has already been illustrated by some other illustrator and published by a publishing hou...

0 answers  ·  posted 9y ago by sam‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to cite literary (fiction) fragments in a naturals sciences journal?

I'm writing a grant in psychology/cognitive neuroscience. I am considering including a fragment of a book at the beginning, to illustrate the question. Regardless of whether this is a good idea, is...

0 answers  ·  posted 9y ago by elisa‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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2 points of view at the same time

I am writing a book about lions and other African predators. The main focus in the one I am working on is lions, but I do quite often refer to 2 big cats that aren't lions. Those are cheetahs and l...

0 answers  ·  posted 9y ago by Caters‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How should I break down a huge table of contents?

I am creating a table of contents for a book, and there are 4 ways of splitting information up. The biggest zones are 'Chapters', those can span several pages; these are bold, underlined and in lar...

0 answers  ·  posted 9y ago by J. Doe‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to move from writing scenes to a short plot?

I've been working professionally as a part-time freelancer journalist for the past couple of years. Over that time I feel I've got a good grasp of how, technically, to construct an engaging piece o...

2 answers  ·  posted 9y ago by Bob Tway‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭