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General Q&A about the craft of professional writing, editing, and publishing. Questions about all types of writing are welcome -- fiction, technical documentation, scholarly articles, poetry, scriptwriting, blogs, and more.

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How can I create drama in a story that is mostly political and procedural?

I'm writing a fantasy story about whether a teacher should be fired or not over teaching competency; most of the story revolves around the politics and the procedural process of the decision. So m...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Standback‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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On copyright laws and plots

I was pondering a lot on the issue with copyrights on plots. Is having an identical plot infringing someone else's copyrighted work? I am fully aware that the character names are copyrighted and c...

1 answer  ·  posted 12y ago by Pacerier‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Technical Writing Software

I'm interested in newer software/software stack to use in writing technical papers. For the longest time I have been use LaTeX to handle this but in looking at getting longer pieces published, such...

6 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Travis‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is there any good time-line software out there?

I write mostly speculative fiction, and use Scrivener for writing and note-taking. But I'm looking to start crafting timelines to keep track of the exact year and months events in the distant and ...

7 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by oldrobotsneverrust‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How can I break up a lengthy explanation?

I have a setting in one of my stories where a character has to describe a very long series of events, giving the history of an object so that others know more about it. This not only provides the r...

3 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Steven Drennon‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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I have compiled a poetry book with poems of 4chan users. It has a lot of vulgarisms, is it possible to publish something like that?

It has around 200 poems, a lot of vulgarisms, and many of them seem senseless.

2 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Can my paragraph use better adjectives and descriptions?

I feel my punctuation is all over the place, and the adjectives are not as charming as I think they are. If anyone has watched the beginning of the first Lord of the Rings, where the hobbit is lyin...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by Snowman‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Resources on plotting mystery stories

I'm looking for books, essays and articles on plotting mystery/detective/investigation stories (and novels). The type of story I'm aiming for is in the vein of Sherlock Holmes, Agatha Christie, or ...

6 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Standback‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What's your favorite keyboard? [closed]

After using a Logitech Internet Pro keyboard for the past several years, as well as an Acer OEM keyboard occasionally, I'm seriously thinking about getting a new keyboard. I write upwards of 7,000 ...

3 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by maguay‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Least possible editing effort if a text is for multiple media?

I want to write a text with some basic styles and images. I plan to use it on a blog, maybe later in a wiki. And there should be a pdf version. I am writing about a software. So there will be scre...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by David Bopp‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Where and how to look for a picture for illustration?

Do you think a writing can always benefit from the use of a visual illustration? If so, how to find for free or buy an appropriate picture, photo, drawing etc.? What are practical recommendations?

0 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by rem‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Mixing topics in a blog

I was reading this Jakob Nielsen Alertbox about the top 10 weblog design mistakes. Mistake #8 was: Mixing Topics If you publish on many different topics, you're less likely to attract ...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by melhosseiny‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How do you avoid purple prose?

I try to watch out for bland, overused adjectives and I keep adverbs to a minimum but -- I hear this phrase a lot and I'm not even sure what it means?

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by Ben‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Book recommendations for writing better technical papers

My employer has presented me with two books to read to help me write better technical papers and emails. Essentials of English Grammar and Handbook of English Grammar and Usage. I have read throu...

3 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Adam Lewis‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Querying for a setting-heavy speculative fiction novel

I'm an attentive follower of Janet Reid's Query Shark, and I've learned a lot. But Reid doesn't represent speculative fiction, which seems to present wrinkles of its own. Particularly, Query Shark...

0 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Standback‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Multiple MLA inline citation question

I'm familiar with the basic rules on inline citation, however, recently I've stumbled onto this problem numerous times so I thought I would ask. When using MLA style inline citations, is it legal ...

0 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by laphiloctete‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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"...and the fire from the stove engulfed him" or "jumped on him" or "covered him" or "devoured him" or what?

Which verb should I use here? He opened the stove and the fire from the stove [engulfed/jumped on/covered/devoured] him. "Help! Help!" - he shouted at once. "I'm on fire!"

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by brilliant‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Use of past vs. present tense in works of fiction

I have recently picked up several works of fiction and begun to read them. I have found that some are written using past tense while others use the present tense. What is the significance of using...

3 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Sarawut Positwinyu‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Simple way/techniques of arranging all the ideas and scenes in a plot?

Sometimes, I get confused as I add more and more ideas and scenes in a plot, is there any way of arranging these?

0 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Alexandro Chen‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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A rhyming dictionary worth bookmarking online or purchasing?

Has anyone come across any really good rhyming dictionaries? If so, what makes it worth having/bookmarking? (eg. completeness/ease of use/absence of really sketchy suggestions)

3 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by mootinator‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Referencing a website in-text using Harvard style

I have the following website page that I need to reference using Harvard style: http://www.ucsusa.org/food_and_agriculture/science_and_impacts/science/what-is-genetic-engineering.html Is this a co...

0 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Simplicity‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Critical review of blog post

I wrote a blog post a long time back. For this post I chose a writing style very different from what I'd read or what I'd seen before. Some guys did criticize me and others did acknowledge me for t...

0 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by n0nChun‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What makes first person plural a tricky narrative voice?

I absolutely loved Joshua Ferris's debut novel Then We Came to the End. Critics highly praised his use for the first person plural as a narrator. The work is set in an office and the "we" used re...

0 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by justkt‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Little did he know

In the movie "Stranger Than Fiction" the professor of literature makes quite a big deal about the phrase "little did he know." I've written papers on "Little did he know." I've taught classes o...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Jack B Nimble‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Quoting text from a country with different internationalization

I'm writing my doctoral dissertation here in the United States, and quoting some text from an English-language paper written in Germany. In Germany, the convention for writing numbers is to use a c...

3 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Ken Bloom‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What elements should be included in a story's setting?

I know this will vary depending on the type of the story and the characters involved, not to mention the location itself. What I am looking for is some kind of guideline for identifying different a...

1 answer  ·  posted 12y ago by Steven Drennon‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Feedback on technical blog post

I've recently composed a blog post about World of Warcraft Authenticators and would love for some feedback as per the quality of writing. Obviously no matter how many times I read it there's no su...

0 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by m.edmondson‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What are the best online writing classes?

I've taken some classes at Mediabistro.com -- both nonfiction -- and while the teachers have been pretty good (one gave me some excellent advice that led to publication in national magazines) ... t...

0 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Slick23‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to figure out if an agent is "on the straight" or "shady"?

Are there any specific signs (singular or groups of) that I should pay attention to when it comes to agents? I have read about agents who work for less reputable publishing houses, charging fees f...

3 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Vatine‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How can I write poems in an attractable manner?

I have written several poems, but only very few won prices. Those poems impressed people very much, so I want you to share your thoughts, what are the key things I have to focus on or I have to kee...

3 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Sankar Ganesh‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Please help me improve this sentence...

In a first-person narrative, I’d like to use the following sentence: It took me nearly a decade to write this script, and now I’d pitch it to the top producer in Hollywood. I’m not following ...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Cliff Hangerson Page‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is translation work likely to help me develop my own writing abilities?

I've been offered work translating some creative works into English. Is this kind of work likely to push my creative boundaries, and teach me how to be a better write of my own original creative wr...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by blueberryfields‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Pantsing a story?

I heard a writer talking about pantsing a story. What does that mean?

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Elizabeth Schechter‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by Amadeus‭

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Guideline on turning points in a novel?

What are some popular guides regarding structuring a novel, specifically what turning points the story should hit and approximately at what point in the manuscript? I'm looking for something more ...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Cliff Hangerson Page‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How do evil protagonists win the reader over in dark fantasy stories? [closed]

I thought about writing fantasy story from the perspective of the evil antagonist (think from Sauron's perspective). So my bad guy will be the protagonist and my good guys will be the antagonist. I...

7 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to write great movie review?

What should we write in a movie review?

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by pramodc84‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What's a good program for tracking submissions?

What's a good program or technique for tracking submissions? I need something that'll keep track of who I've submitted to, when, if they've replied, and preferably tell me how long it's been out. A...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by Ralph Gallagher‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What style suggestions are common for which words are used in hyperlinks?

With a purpose of avoiding "More details here" style links that do not provide any information in the link itself, what styles are common/popular/suggested? A good example case (with bold as the p...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by MrHen‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Put text between section and subsection headings?

Are there rules about whether or not to put text between section and subsection headings (in scholarly works)? 1 section heading text / no text here? 1.1 subsection heading more ...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by type‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Where can I publicize a website I have developed for writers?

I am not a writer, but I have developed a website for them. Where can I advertise and publicize it?

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by morpheus‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Writing about drug induced hallucinations and paranoia

Not long ago I wrote a short story about a mathematics graduate student on the verge of a nervous breakdown. The young student is innocent and working to finish a difficult mathematical derivation ...

0 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Amichai‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Does giving away free stories boost sales?

Is it worth it for writers to give away free short stories (or entire novels)? I've heard people say that having freebies on your site can boost sales of your books. I'm not talking about giving aw...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Ralph Gallagher‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to improve this introductory paragraph (to fit writing standards and grab the reader's attention)?

A clock is striking 4:00am at a psychiatric clinic. The darkness, the silence, and absence of people makes it look like a morgue. A young mental health professional is sitting in a cha...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Alexandro Chen‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Do writers use highlighting to clarify ideas in their work in progress?

In programming we often use syntax highlight in order to have a better picture of what the role of particular bits of code is (using different colours). I wonder if writers do something similar - ...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Alexandro Chen‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is it a good idea to write a summary of a plot before writing the full version?

Sometimes when I write a plot I get confused about the motivations of the characters and how events connect as I change elements. Is it a good idea to write a summary first in order to organise th...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by Alexandro Chen‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Are there good tips on being a better *creative* writer?

I'm a student at Case, and while we of course have an English department, it seems the only kind of writing classes/courses available are for learning to be either a "literary" writer, or a "schola...

5 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Billy ONeal‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to refer to character of focus in a story

I find that when I write, I'm not always sure how to refer to the character of focus. You can only say "he/she" so many times before it feels choppy and repetitive. Constantly referring to characte...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by MaQleod‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What breaks suspension of disbelief?

So much of Sci-Fi and Fantasy requires the viewer (or reader) to suspend their disbelief: The speed of light can be circumvented, magic works, vampires are real (and may or may not sparkle), etc. ...

3 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Jeff‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Best humorous exaggerated comparisons

I love funny comparisons in newspaper articles or other texts. I am talking about things like "exciting like a winter morning" (except funny - I don't know any good English ones). What are the fu...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Franz‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Character with extreme manners

My objective is Victorian-style tea-drinking "upper class" lady characters. (It's more of a writing challenge.) Does anyone have any useful resources or tips for creating such a character? Persona...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by srcspider‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭