Activity for Monica Cellio
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| Edit | Post #26048 | Post edited | — | almost 7 years ago |
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| Edit | Post #39226 | Initial revision | — | almost 7 years ago |
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A: Alternatives to second-person POV narration in RPG settings In your first example, all three of your sentences focus on the effect. Instead, mix in some descriptions of the cause. Instead of: > You have a feeling of immense dread as you take in the macabre sight > You are reminded of your own mortality as you witness the gruesome murder of Sir Imp... (more) |
— | almost 7 years ago |
| Comment | Post #35643 |
Yes, if the script is unfamiliar, then the reader will interpret all cases of it as "blob of that other alphabet", and unless phrases are very different in length, will often not notice if this blob is the same as a previous one. (more) |
— | almost 7 years ago |
| Comment | Post #39220 |
@Art, it's behaving correctly for me in Chrome on my Mac. I don't know what the difference is. (I did disable userscripts in Firefox to check for that; made no difference.) (more) |
— | almost 7 years ago |
| Comment | Post #39220 |
@Art with the web console open, when I click on an item in the inbox I get "TypeError: NetworkError when attempting to fetch resource.". (Dunno what that means. I mean, I know what all those English words mean, but...) (more) |
— | almost 7 years ago |
| Comment | Post #39223 |
On the avatar, did you save the profile after? You have to both choose the file (using those buttons) and then use the "save" button at the bottom for the profile edit. (more) |
— | almost 7 years ago |
| Comment | Post #39220 |
@Art that's what should happen, but it's not for me currently. (Firefox, Windows -- I'll try a different browser/machine later. My (now) three most recent notifications are not dismissing. (more) |
— | almost 7 years ago |
| Comment | Post #39220 |
@Art are your inbox notifications overly sticky too, or is it just me? (The notification for Thomas's comment on the question here isn't going away for me. Don't know if it's something on my end or not.) (more) |
— | almost 7 years ago |
| Edit | Post #25663 | Post edited | — | almost 7 years ago |
| Edit | Post #33955 | Post edited | — | almost 7 years ago |
| Comment | Post #39219 |
Welcome @Neil! (I don't know if we have comment pings yet.) (more) |
— | almost 7 years ago |
| Edit | Post #39219 | Initial revision | — | almost 7 years ago |
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Welcome to Writing on Codidact! Welcome to a new home for the Writing community. Please use it, report problems and make requests on Meta, and collect your thoughts about what we need to support our community. This site is running on beta software that will eventually become Codidact. We started with a Q&A platform that al... (more) |
— | almost 7 years ago |
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A: How do I cite previously published print school newspapers on now online school newspaper? Print publications that are no longer in print are (were) still print publications. You would therefore cite them the same way you would any other newspaper article from a still-extant paper. (Citation format varies by style guide.) However, if you only accessed it via an intermediary, like a com... (more) |
— | about 7 years ago |
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A: How to eliminate standoff between "Lengthy" vs "Concision"? "Concise" doesn't mean "very short"; it means "no more verbose than it needs to be". In your case, you have needs that establish a minimum length. Trying to fight against that will only lead to frustration, as you've seen. If people are using this document as a basis for implementation, it's bett... (more) |
— | about 7 years ago |
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A: Compelling story with the world as a villain A villain has intention -- it's out to cause some outcome, foil the main character (if it's personal), and generally advance its own agenda. The world, on the other hand, just is, barring worlds with minds and will. It sounds like you're trying to write a person-versus-nature (or society) story r... (more) |
— | about 7 years ago |
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A: How to write a sincerely religious protagonist without preaching or affirming or judging their worldview? Show his religious practices more and his explicit beliefs less. What does a devout Catholic do? Probably he doesn't spend all day talking about his beliefs; instead he lives them. He tithes. He fasts on Fridays. He attends mass daily before going to work (or wherever he spends his days). He teac... (more) |
— | about 7 years ago |
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A: Referring to different instances of the same character in time travel The Magic 2.0 series by Scott Meyer has this situation with a core character (so it's not a passing situation). The narrator and the characters identify the two as Brit the Elder and Brit the Younger. When more time-travel shenanigans happen, we also encounter Brit the Even Elder and Brit the Muc... (more) |
— | about 7 years ago |
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A: How to write a good moderator nomination post? A nomination post is basically a sales pitch, packed into 1200 characters. You need to persuade readers that you are or might be a good choice in a few hundred words (give or take). So a nomination is longer than an "elevator pitch" but shorter than a full bid. Therefore, don't think of your nom... (more) |
— | over 7 years ago |
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A: Character had a different name in the past. Which name should I use in a flashback? The reader needs a connection when transitioning into the flashback. That transition can be either external or internal. By external, I mean introducing the flashback. In this case, the reader knows who's in the flashback so you can use the then-current name without any more explanation. For exa... (more) |
— | over 7 years ago |
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A: Is there a need for better software for writers? IDE-like tools exist for writers. Scrivener is a powerful general-purpose tool (also with questions here). Madcap Flare, aimed at technical writers, has good support for updating links, defining "snippets" (xinclude blocks, essentially), variables, conditionalization, advanced build options, and ... (more) |
— | over 7 years ago |
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A: Do publishers care if submitted work has already been copyrighted? If you live in a country that is a signatory to the Berne Convention (most countries are), then your work is copyrighted as soon as you create it, regardless of whether you go through any registration process. To a publisher, your work is already copyrighted, and if they want the copyright and no... (more) |
— | over 7 years ago |
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A: How can I effectively research for a high-fantasy setting? > Base parts of the setting on real world cultures or locations. Unless you have near-infinite time to do your worldbuilding, you're probably going to keep coming back to our world. So start there! Not in the sense of "modern-day Earth with the serial numbers filed off", but in the sense of spec... (more) |
— | over 7 years ago |
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A: What is a more techy Technical Writer job title that isn't cutesy or confusing? This is a challenging specialization to capture in a job title, which is why my LinkedIn tagline says "speaker to programmers". But that doesn't work as a job title at any but the edgiest startups. As suggested in this answer, some use Programming Writer. At a previous company I was documenting ... (more) |
— | over 7 years ago |
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A: Should one blog in a few languages? Writing a full translation will approximately double the time you spend creating each post, so as other answers have said, you'll need to consider the cost versus benefit. However, thee's another approach you could take: keep writing in your native language and provide a summary in the other lang... (more) |
— | over 7 years ago |
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How should we plan for translations' space needs when designing diagrams that require text? Our documentation set includes some diagrams where text is integral and can't be handled in callouts, like flowcharts and entity relationship diagrams. Our documentation is translated, so these diagrams need to be translated too. But diagram design is informed by the amount of text we need to inc... (more) |
— | over 7 years ago |
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How can we make images with (necessary) text more translatable mechanically? Our documentation set includes some diagrams, such as entity relationship diagrams and flowcharts, where text is integral and cannot reasonably be handled in callouts. Our documentation is translated into another language, so these diagrams ought to get translated too. (I don't know if they curre... (more) |
— | over 7 years ago |
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A: How much episode recap is necessary in a tv-focused podcast? You said in a comment that this is for an existing, old show, presumably one with a fanbase. While your listeners have presumably seen it (they're listening to your podcast about it, after all), they might not have done so recently and even hardcore fans might not always remember episode sequenci... (more) |
— | over 7 years ago |
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How can I make names more distinctive without making them longer? In the point-of-view culture in my story, all of the women in priestly families have two-syllable names beginning with vowels. (There are reasons for this, but they're completely tangential to my question.) I've gotten feedback from a beta reader that the character names look/sound too similar, e... (more) |
— | over 7 years ago |
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When blogging recipes, how can I support both readers who want the narrative/journey and ones who want the printer-friendly recipe? Increasingly often, if you Google for a recipe your search results will be full of long, image-rich blog posts that, somewhere in there, have the actual recipe you were looking for. Many of these have a "printer-friendly version" link to make that easier; I can get the stuff I need in my kitchen ... (more) |
— | over 7 years ago |
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A: Making science for toddlers easy to remember It's been decades since I was a kid watching cartoons on TV, and I can still sing some of the Schoolhouse Rock songs. Schoolhouse Rock, for those unfamiliar with it, was a series of short (2-3 minute) bits of educational programming interspersed among Bugs Bunny, Road Runner, Bullwinkle, et al. ... (more) |
— | over 7 years ago |
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For HTML documentation sets, are there meaningful guidelines for topic length? We produce a large HTML documentation set with the conventional two-pane view: expandable table of contents on the left, selected topic on the right. When you select a topic, if it has subtopics -- that is, sub-pages in the table of contents -- the TOC automatically expands to show them. Because ... (more) |
— | over 7 years ago |
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Adding tags to documentation built in Flare? Our software documentation set (for a SQL analytics database platform) is large, because SQL and databases have many pieces. Often a single statement, function, or feature will be highly related to a few others, and in the past people have (manually) added "related information" sections to pages ... (more) |
— | over 7 years ago |
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A: What is special in API documentation compared to general technical writing? API stands for "application programming interface". API documentation is addressed to programmers who will use that interface to accomplish some task. While all technical writing is addressed to someone who's trying to accomplish some task, and while some of those people (and tasks) are deeply te... (more) |
— | over 7 years ago |
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A: Should I create a domain name using a pen name that is common with another person's domain name? Names are almost never globally unique. This is true whether the owner chooses or the owner's parents do. Author Alex Feinman even has a note on his web site (.net) saying "looking for the other one? that's .com" with a link. If you search Google or LinkedIn for a name, odds are good you'll find ... (more) |
— | over 7 years ago |
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A: Symbolism of 18 Journeyers I see two parts to your question: signaling that 18 is significant, and signaling why it is significant. Assuming that you'll have Jewish readers too, don't skimp on the first part -- you want to give them something to notice and figure out, too. Another answer addresses ways to show why 18 is s... (more) |
— | over 7 years ago |
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How can I highlight changes in HTML output from Flare, based on branch diff? We use Madcap Flare for a large documentation set, with HTML output. (Flare source is a very HTML-y XML with some Flare-specific additions.) We use git for source control and new work is done on branches. This means that at the end we have a git pull request (PR) that can show a diff between the ... (more) |
— | over 7 years ago |
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A: Should I use acronyms in dialogues before telling the readers what it stands for in fiction? If you don't provide a hint, then readers will know only that somebody requested a meeting and that's considered an emergency. If you want to convey something about the nature of the organization (or emergency) you need to provide more of a hint, but that doesn't necessarily mean expanding the ac... (more) |
— | over 7 years ago |
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A: How to include external references when writing internal documentation? The guiding principle in my experience is: put the link where the reader needs the referenced information. Examples: - "This interface is like Somebody Else's Thing (link, or make SET a link itself), and in addition..." -- put the link right there, because somebody unfamiliar with SET will need ... (more) |
— | over 7 years ago |
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A: Do we need to make consistent use of archaic English in our poem/novel? Regardless of what you're writing, if you use an archaic form readers will notice, and if you use an archaic form only once and not everywhere it applies, readers will notice that too. If you're doing it for effect, you've achieved your goal. This is sometimes the case in poetry. On the other han... (more) |
— | over 7 years ago |
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A: Including disabled characters without "inspiration porn" You avoid it by showing us a whole, three-dimensional character with attendant complexity. Doing great things is not about one thing. Your character has a mix of traits, talents, interests, inclinations, genes (if it's that kind of magic), and more, and uses all those things to deal with all obs... (more) |
— | over 7 years ago |
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A: How do we edit a novel that's written by several people? The first step is to work out some style guidelines among yourselves. Agree on what style you want the finished product to follow. Because this is a project among friends rather than, say, a corporate publication, you'll probably end up including aspects of each writer's style while moving the wh... (more) |
— | over 7 years ago |
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How large should photos on my blog be? I sometimes post photos on my blog, like when I'm blogging about food. I've been shrinking the huge pictures my phone takes down to a size that fits more reasonably in a browser window -- my browser window, so far -- because I don't want my posts to require a huge window. Recently I've noticed th... (more) |
— | over 7 years ago |
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A: What is in scope for criticizing technical writing This answer covers a single work like a paper well, and what it says applies to larger works too. Correctness and clarity are the most important factors in any technical work. For larger works, such as a new section in a large documentation set, I look for some additional things: - Consistency o... (more) |
— | over 7 years ago |