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General Q&A about the craft of professional writing, editing, and publishing. Questions about all types of writing are welcome -- fiction, technical documentation, scholarly articles, poetry, scriptwriting, blogs, and more.

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Can someone publish a story that happened to you?

Can someone take a story that happened to you, without your knowledge, and publish it? Using your name and specifics, and take the copyright for it? A person, whose mother lived in our small town,...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Juli Ridgway‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to avoid introduction cliches

I'm writing a research paper in one of my math classes about the P vs NP problem. I feel the introduction to my paper sounds like a cliche. This is my intro: In the field of mathematics, there ...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Mettal‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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As an author, how can you ensure that your agent/publisher isn’t ripping you off by pocketing your money and giving you false info about sales?

Agents typically demand that authors sign over complete control of their royalties to them so that their money comes from the agent rather than from the publisher directly. I know a certain author ...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by user394536‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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About sound effects

I'm writing a script that shows a speaker interacting with their audience. The speaker finishes speaking and the audience reacts. I wrote it like this. Loud CHEERS from the audience. I'm wonderin...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Karen Kelly‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to name indistinguishable henchmen in a screenplay?

A large group of indistinguishable henchman feature throughout my screenplay. What is an acceptable naming method for them? Let's say I wanna call them 'Red shirts'. Can I ... A) Call them all RE...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Andy A‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What is a more techy Technical Writer job title that isn't cutesy or confusing?

I have been hired as a Technical Writer at a firm who needed multiple types of writers: A few people were hired to write content for the average website reader interested in our product, such as a...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by user2263986‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Will a change in perspective "intimacy" confuse the reader?

[Not a native english speaker] I am currently writing a novel, told from the 3rd-person POV, with several characters being followed in different scenes. Will the following confuse the readers? ...

0 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Can you use a semicolon to connect fragments that are one item in a vertical list?

I'm trying to write a numbered vertical list. The items are not complete sentences. Can you use a semicolon to connect two fragments that are one item? Receive guests; entertain guests Or, sho...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by happycrabapples‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How should we plan for translations' space needs when designing diagrams that require text?

Our documentation set includes some diagrams where text is integral and can't be handled in callouts, like flowcharts and entity relationship diagrams. Our documentation is translated, so these di...

0 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Monica Cellio‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How can we make images with (necessary) text more translatable mechanically?

Our documentation set includes some diagrams, such as entity relationship diagrams and flowcharts, where text is integral and cannot reasonably be handled in callouts. Our documentation is translat...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Monica Cellio‭  ·  edited 3y ago by Monica Cellio‭

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Abandoning the Ordinary World

As I understand it, when considering the Three-Act Structure, the first half of Act One prior to the Inciting Incident is used to show the reader the 'Ordinary World'. In the story I am working on...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Arkenstein XII‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to format quick flashes in a screenplay?

Question : In my screenplay, the main character occasionally suffers quick flashes, like visions. I have been unable to assert if I am formatting these correctly. Please also note the single and do...

0 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Andy A‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How much episode recap is necessary in a tv-focused podcast?

I'm planning for my next podcast to do an episode-by-episode tv show analysis. (Actually two are in development, but they'll be about different shows.) I'll be the main researcher/outline-assembl...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by April Salutes Monica C.‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What are the major weaknesses of Writing Excuses as a resourse for learning the craft? [closed]

I ask as somebody who loves Writing Excuses (https://writingexcuses.com), and relies on the podcast heavily as an educational resource. My writing ambitions are well aligned with their stated scope...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by sesquipedalias‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Podcast Transcripts: suggested collaborative tools?

I love accessibility, so any show that is 100% scripted, my script = the transcript, and I'm happy to share it. For podcasts with a cohost, there's no easy transcription software, and fiverr is ac...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by April Salutes Monica C.‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Elongated vowel sounds

When we speak sometimes we draw out certain sounds for emphasis. We also see this technique in song, for both emphasis as well as expanding the meter to make the words fit a certain rhythm. One w...

5 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by AGirlHasNoName‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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If you're not a professional, what motivates you to keep writing? [closed]

Writing. There comes a time in my daily routine. I get a striking idea. A topic to write in my blog. A pondering about a specific event that happened hours ago. As a working professional (not as a...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Prasad_Joshi‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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A poker game description that does not feel gimmicky

I'm writing a scene in which four characters play a high-stakes poker game. So far my narrator has been an omniscient third person, who just does not wish to enter into the characters' heads. I st...

4 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by _X_‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Punctuating text messages with speaker tags in running copy

Punctuation (and spelling and capitalization) in text messages is different from punctuation in other forms of written communication (emails, memos, standard prose). In particular, punctuation, o...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Lauren Ipsum‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What punctuation would you invent to solve your issues? [closed]

What punctuation is missing from English that might solve your writing issues? People may be able to come up with established ones that meet your criteria, such as the /s to indicate "that last...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by April Salutes Monica C.‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to create a consistent feel for character names in a fantasy setting?

Recently while doing some world-building for a role-playing game with a friend we were seriously struggling with naming character consistently. By consistently I mean make the names feel as though...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by linksassin‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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When blogging recipes, how can I support both readers who want the narrative/journey and ones who want the printer-friendly recipe?

Increasingly often, if you Google for a recipe your search results will be full of long, image-rich blog posts that, somewhere in there, have the actual recipe you were looking for. Many of these ...

6 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Monica Cellio‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to identify target audience? And how much details do I need to know about my perfect reader?

I'm identifying my target audience based on the experiment explained in the Snowflake Method book. The narrator describes it as follows: “Now I want you to imagine that you’ve published your no...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by iamtowrite‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Do I have to pay royalties if I include excerpts from other works?

In a lot of books, at the beginning, the authors include quotes from poetry or songs that are relevant to the theme of their story or to their characters' situations. Obviously I would have to ask...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by weakdna says reinstate monica‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Can one be a co-translator of a book, if he does not know the language that the book is translated into?

I am translating a religious book from language A to language B and have hired a student worker to help me. He is a native speaker of language A but does not speak language B at all. What I ask him...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Zuriel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to write about a homosexual relationship when I haven't experienced one?

I have two female characters, one who is lesbian, and the other bisexual. However, I am male. So not only am I to write the opposite gender, which I actually feel more comfortable doing, for some o...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Kale Slade‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How can I make an eldritch abomination out of humanity? [closed]

The fanfic I'm writing is so that I may get into the swing of literature. A test story if you might like in the Mass Effect Universe. Please prepare for a long text because there's a lot of trivia ...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Alberto Lazo-Morejon‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How can I incorporate poetry techniques to improve my prose?

My first question on the site was How do I stop using 'the' to start sentences so much? , One of the answers said: I would suggest reading more English poetry to pick up some techniques. I co...

0 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by linksassin‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to prevent "they're falling in love" trope

I have two characters, the male being sort of a jerk, but lightening up later in the story, and the female is...very hateful. But a person who read the first chapter asked me if they were going to ...

4 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Kale Slade‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to keep a dark protagonist who wants to keep his humanity dark?

My MC is in a dark line of work. He is an assassin. He is also someone with lines he does not cross. He has been duped or coerced to do things he would not, but still holds to some standards. I wa...

4 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Rasdashan‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Avoiding the "not like other girls" trope?

The "not like other girls" trope is pretty common in young adult fiction, arguably misogynistic, and usually applied to a female protagonist or love interest. Attempts to make a female character s...

7 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by weakdna says reinstate monica‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Shortening a title without changing its meaning

Essentially, I want to change: Managing a lot of people is a very difficult problem to: Lot of people, difficult problem I understand that when you shorten a title, it will become more vagu...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by tefisjb‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to script two scenes happening simultaneously?

I am writing a movie where a character has an interview with a news reporter. The scenes segues into a character profile of the interviewee that features a voice over from the interviewer. How woul...

0 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Karen Kelly‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is it okay to majorly distort historical facts while writing a fiction story?

Suppose A is a famous historical character with a known history of emotional attachment with a particular set of people. If I would want to write a fictional story about character A that might invo...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Karan Desai‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is wanting to ask what to write an indication that you need to change your story?

Many writers eventually come to a point in their writing where they don't know what to write. They have a certain status or state of affairs that the narration has reached and another state that th...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Trials to claim a throne [closed]

My novel is about a girl who is the heir to the throne of Helheim, the Norse world of the dead, but in order to claim the throne she has to pass a 3 part trial. I’m having a hard time coming up wi...

0 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Maranda‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Why do professional authors make "consistency" mistakes? And how to avoid them?

I'm currently reading a sci-fi book that has over a dozen characters. The author had written dialog for two different characters using the same odd idiom in two separate chapters so far. I cannot s...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by iamtowrite‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How do I differentiate characters in first person POV when the narrator doesn't know them yet?

Okay, so two women are in a bar and I'm telling the story from one of the women's POV. Two guys come in and the women are watching/listening to them from a distance. They don't know their names or ...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Kelvinator‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Can I publish a book at 14? [closed]

I'm currently thinking of writing a murder mystery series with three books that I am planning it's called Tailor Shop Mysteries and I have three titles and my family in willing to help me with the ...

0 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Nate Rodgers‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How do I go from 300 unfinished/half written blog posts, to published posts?

Goal: To publish a blogpost 2 times/month (from once in 4 months) Currently: 300 blog posts in drafts/unfinished. I even have three 20k word unfinished novellas gathering dust. (Over 5 years of ca...

4 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by thedancingqueen‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What are the points to remember when the pet is the narrator and is narrating the story of its owner?

I'm working on a novel which is based on a true story. I first thought of writing from the heroine's POV, but later changed my mind and introduced a pet in the plot as the narrator of the story. Wh...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by user37485‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Will it be accepted, if there is no ''Main Character" stereotype?

There is a character in every story. Special One. It becomes the center of the story. i.e. the Main character. The author takes special care of them. Provides them wise thinking. Good luck. A cha...

4 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Prasad_Joshi‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Indicating multiple different modes of speech (fantasy language or telepathy)

All the viewpoint characters in my story are orcs and speak Orcish as their native tongue, but some are bilingual: they use English to talk to humans. Additionally, the main character has a magic p...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Robyn‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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PoD services that do hardcovers of custom dimensions?

Which print-on-demand (PoD) services allow creating hardcover books of arbitrary dimensions (e.g., 115 × 157 mm)? I'm looking to print 60 copies.

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Geremia‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Famous mistranslations - correct them?

Often enough works of literature, particularly old classics, receive renewed translations. Sometimes, the older translation might contain mistakes. And sometimes, the work being an old classic, the...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Characterizing a sentient robot: inhuman PoV

Following the previous question: Characterizing a sentient robot: sensory data I'm writing a robot character with a particular PoV. In the previous question I wanted to talk about sensory data;...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Liquid‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Turning away from the 3-act structure - what guides my pacing now?

Not all stories follow a 3-act structure. As an example, Les Misérables is rather episodic in its nature: first there's the story of Bishop Myriel and how he meets Jean Valjean, then there's Fantin...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Using substitution ciphers to generate new alphabets in a novel

A substitution cipher is a method used in cryptography to encrypt the meaning of a text. In the most common form, a substitution cipher changes every letter in the target text with another, making...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Liquid‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Introducing a character in the third act?

I'm well into the third act of my novel and I'm introducing a new character that will play a part in the ending and an even bigger part in the roughly sketched sequel I have in mind. Now, I'm pre...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Liquid‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Can disgust be a key component of horror?

The feeling of disgust is often used in horrors, exspecially visual medias (where is arguably easier to shock the audience with great effect). Often horror stories revolve around one scary element...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Liquid‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭