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General Q&A about the craft of professional writing, editing, and publishing. Questions about all types of writing are welcome -- fiction, technical documentation, scholarly articles, poetry, scriptwriting, blogs, and more.

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Copying Certain Information From A Official Website

Hey Guys I was researching on a assignment I have to submit to my university. When i was about to copy certain information i went under the "Terms of Use" seeing if i could copy the said informatio...

2 answers  ·  posted 7y ago by The Keeper‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Is it too cliche to have the villan of my story from a different planet?

I need to know because all of the anime that I watch have at least one character or more from another planet, and they're not usually friendly. I don't want to come off as one of those who "follow ...

2 answers  ·  posted 7y ago by Aspen the Artist and Author‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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In the digital age of Kindle and POD is a book ever finished?

About five years ago I self-published a novella "The Spoils of War". In the middle there's a section where the MC is packed of to Pakistan because the family don't want to face the embarrassment of...

1 answer  ·  posted 7y ago by Surtsey‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Formatting used when introducing a term

I found a previous post about introducing terms, but it doesn't quite answer my question. I have a more specific question about the punctuation used when introducing a term, and not how to stylisti...

1 answer  ·  posted 7y ago by stila‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What I kind of project can I do for a writer's group to show that I have mastered character development?

I have begun writing a story about two city-states in the year 2307 in an arms race to create a time machine. The protagonist must regain the confidence of his old "sim stealing" gang whom he sold...

2 answers  ·  posted 7y ago by user9885‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Act 3 totally broken...keep writing?

I'm ready to enter the final act, Act 3, of my (first big) story and by now I'm pretty sure I'll have to rewrite 50-70% in ACT 1 and 2. I outlined the whole story but it is clear that my main her...

3 answers  ·  posted 7y ago by Tim Dams‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How do I break away from imitating published works?

I don't know if other people wanting to be writers experience this, but I get driven by my obsession. It used to be Hunger Games, then Star Wars, Maze Runner, and finally Guardians of the Galaxy. ...

3 answers  ·  posted 7y ago by A.N.M‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Is it possible for an aggressive character to become sensitive?

So I'm writing a story, a fanfiction to be specific, and a main character is an aggressive, emotionless, constantly angry man, who swears a lot and doesn't care much about anything. I want him to d...

2 answers  ·  posted 7y ago by May‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Is it a bad idea to write and edit chapter by chapter?

I am beginning to write original novels after writing fanfictions and posting them online for about six years. My usual process is: write chapter, edit chapter, post chapter, repeat. This means tha...

4 answers  ·  posted 7y ago by sudowoodo‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How can I make the final realisation less depressing?

Most stories carry some element of realisation. Whether that realisation is the best sort of fireball for defeating the Dark Overlord, or how I can lessen my pride to make my marriage work, the cha...

3 answers  ·  posted 7y ago by Daron‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to work in a piece of information that no MC knows, when writing in 3PLtd?

In my story, there is a group of four characters that are called upon a classic macguffin hunt. The characters know that the macguffin is important, but they do not know all the details as why it ...

5 answers  ·  posted 7y ago by cobaltduck‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Powers with unknown limits vs ones full of rules, limits and reasons?

I'm in a dilemma: I don't want my characters to have flawless, limitless and bad-consequence-less powers, but I also don't want to have my creativity limited by such rules and limits. In my case, i...

2 answers  ·  posted 7y ago by Yuuza‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Using accent marks in Fantasy novels

I'm wondering what are the basic ways that accent marks should be used when coming up with fantasy names of people, places, etc. Sorry if this might be a little vague of a question.

2 answers  ·  posted 7y ago by SpiralStudios‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Caption title for screenshots

When creating a figure caption related to a software screenshot, can I use title case or should I match the case that is in the application? For Example, "Figure 1-1. New Virtual Machine – Select ...

2 answers  ·  posted 7y ago by barb higgins‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How do I keep the gender of my main character purposely ambiguous?

I'm a newcomer to this community, and have recently started giving serious thought to my first novel. I'm basically working on an idea I had a few years back. It's fiction, has a lot to do with fae...

6 answers  ·  posted 7y ago by Jack Rabbit‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Classical Style vs. Modern Innovation

For some time now, the matter of classical versus modern writing has weighed heavily in the discussion of my mind-congress. Here is my thought: given the sheer reverence that is given to classical ...

2 answers  ·  posted 7y ago by th0nk-‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Is my story a rip-off?

So basically I'm writing a story set in a magical world where there are separate covens, each with different mission statements (there is one for those who want to be healers, one for those who wan...

2 answers  ·  posted 7y ago by Wurrie Wart‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Do you need to have an introduction at the beginning of every book in a series?

A series I am working on deals with an underlying storyline that progresses through each book. I'm afraid of confusing a reader if they decide to start reading a book somewhere in the middle of the...

1 answer  ·  posted 7y ago by K. Bailey‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What English version of the bible should I quote from?

Say I want to quote from the bible in something I'm writing (think the famous passage in Pulp Fiction). What bible version should I quote from? I've done some research but only ended up more confu...

8 answers  ·  posted 7y ago by ggambett‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What do you call a narrator who is not unreliable, but is naive?

While an unreliable narrator is someone who is deceiving the reader (or possibly himself), there are plenty of stories where the narrator is truthfully relaying what happened, but does not fully un...

3 answers  ·  posted 7y ago by Graham Powell‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Writing differently when following different character POVs - mainly age difference. (3rd Person)

I'm writing a sci-fi novel with more than one main character. Since I'm not an experienced writer, I still struggle with some basic "rules" within writing that may or may not exist. This issue ...

4 answers  ·  posted 7y ago by storbror‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to deal with nameless characters?

In the novel I'm planning the human characters that inhabit the world are all clones of each other. Man and woman. They aren't given names when born, instead they are given serial numbers that also...

2 answers  ·  posted 7y ago by Victor Matheus‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Does a story necessarily need a theme?

I'm writing a short story From what I understand, the theme is the message that I want to send across. Akin to Beauty and the Beast's "Don't judge a book by its cover" theme, or "Opposites attract...

2 answers  ·  posted 7y ago by Dylan Beck‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How do I incorporate Vocabulary in my writing that I already know?

I seem to have this problem where I know a lot of words but can't always seem to think them up when I write an article or a story. I know the meaning of most of these words, but when I write, some ...

4 answers  ·  posted 7y ago by Rio1210‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What's better in fiction: to make personal statements or universal statements?

Here's an example from my own writing: Watching the ceiling fan stir my thoughts, I said, “His favorite thing was to tell me about his day.” Mrs. Saeki gawked at me behind her square gla...

2 answers  ·  posted 7y ago by alex‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Is this an example of an unreliable narrator?

I've been writing a mystery story recently, but I've run into a problem concerning the major plot twist, and was hoping for some guidance from more experienced writers. Here's the scenario: Perso...

2 answers  ·  posted 7y ago by moe‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How do I include translations without ruining the flow of the text?

A character speaks two languages throughout the whole plot. How to insert the translation of the other language without ruining the layout of the story or text? For example: "Guten tag, Herr X...

2 answers  ·  posted 7y ago by J. Roberts‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Will bookstores order a self-published book if customers request it?

If a book is not returnable, has a wholesaler discount of 45% and costs £10.99, does a book store sell this book if a customer comes into a store and wants to order it? In short: Is a book still a...

3 answers  ·  posted 7y ago by del4y‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Should a reader have enough information to deduce the twist?

When building a twist into the ending, should I leak enough information such that astute readers could predict the twist if they stopped and mulled it over or should I withhold key elements to guar...

3 answers  ·  posted 7y ago by user2859458‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How do I end a comedy sketch?

I have a premise, which I think is funny/clever. I want to write this as a comedy sketch, to be acted out or shot on video. I have three "scenes" which are basically three different re-capitulatio...

3 answers  ·  posted 7y ago by user151841‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to write a manipulative protagonist that the audience can connect with

I've created a manipulative sort of protagonist, one who enjoys mind games, blackmail, systematically destroying people who've wronged her, that sort of thing. I personally find her very interesti...

3 answers  ·  posted 7y ago by NoFicByHalves‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Too Long for Title/Subtitle?

I was considering naming my book "Cherry on Top." However, because this may be hard to search for on Google, I was going to add a subtitle. Perhaps make the full title/subtitle "Cherry on Top: Not ...

1 answer  ·  posted 7y ago by AddalynnMoore‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to prevent confusion when writing in two POVs that don't alternate between scenes?

I'm writing a short story structured like this: Character A's POV * * * Character B's POV * * * Character B's POV * * * Character A's POV * * * Character B's POV * * * Based on the firs...

1 answer  ·  posted 7y ago by alex‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Am I Breaking Too Many Rules?

I've finally committed to writing my first novel. I've been listening to things like Writing Excuses which encourages first time writers to finish their works, but I'm definitely writing an old dar...

5 answers  ·  posted 7y ago by Kirk‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Formatting multiple languages while avoiding italics for native speakers in their POV

Looking at this question, I was trying to figure out how to format a small family of novels and short stories that use a number of languages. My original approach went with the above question's sty...

2 answers  ·  posted 7y ago by dmoonfire‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Where does the "black moment" fall in a novel?

I'm currently learning about story structure and there's not much consensus on the "black moment" or "all is lost lull" that happens around Act 2. Is this moment of defeat before or after the secon...

4 answers  ·  posted 7y ago by pbjtoast‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How much work does a (nonfiction) ghostwriter typically do?

I just finished the charming short memoir from actor Cary Elwes, As You Wish, about his experiences while filming The Princess Bride. The voice sounds very much like Elwes, but the cover clearly sa...

2 answers  ·  posted 7y ago by Lauren Ipsum‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Are there any successful precedents of "gentle" fourth-wall-breaking?

The following is a paraphrased snippet of something I wrote, it is a conversation between the protagonist--a nihilist teenage boy--and an alien sociologist who communicates to him via telepathy, so...

1 answer  ·  posted 7y ago by user289661‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Can this sentence have the same detail and yet be simple to comprehend? [closed]

While inside the weatherbeaten maternity hut lit by a single candle, out of the dark shadow of its mother's womb, the most unusual child ever seen in the village was delivered; and while the...

3 answers  ·  posted 7y ago by Nirav‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How does one write a misanthropic character likeable?

Let's say the character has over the years grown to dislike humans because he had many negative experiences with them, and is disappointed in humanity itself. How does one write such a character wi...

2 answers  ·  posted 7y ago by DarkYagami‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Creating clues for a mystery subplot

I am working on a story in which the characters must solve a mystery. It's a "team-building exercise" at school, in which they must work together. They are graded on how well they work together and...

1 answer  ·  posted 7y ago by FlyingPiMonster‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How do I fix a text wall when I already have one?

When I write answers to questions on the stack exchange network my end result is often quite lengthy. While length itself isn't a problem for me, sometimes my answers end up like this. This happens...

1 answer  ·  posted 7y ago by Please stop being evil‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to handle translation of a language in a comic, while preserving a sense that the language is significant?

I am producing a comic in which a fictional language is frequently spoken. This language (and which characters are able to speak it) is significant to the plot, so it's important that the reader ...

4 answers  ·  posted 7y ago by TheTermiteSociety‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What Can Ensure Re-Readability?

I've come across some answers and questions on this site which have gotten me thinking about re-readability. It isn't something that I think about much, but now that I consider it, I think it could...

4 answers  ·  posted 8y ago by Thomas Myron‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Self inserts that have influence from your life

I saw this question being asked and it lead me to wonder something.... It seems that self inserting your.... person is not considered good practice or should be kept to a minimal. So my question p...

1 answer  ·  posted 8y ago by ggiaquin16‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Is it a bad idea to adopt an 'English' pen name as an Asian American writer to reach a wider audience?

There is currently a dearth of Asian American writers on U.S. library bookshelves, and those few authors who are Asian Americans tend to write about things associated with Asian culture. Think of A...

8 answers  ·  posted 8y ago by Sharpie‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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"Quote" within a quote MLA

So I have a quote that has double quotation marks inside it. Would I leave those in? Or replace them with single quotes? In Carolyn Gregoire’s article “What Your 'Life Story' Really Says About...

1 answer  ·  posted 8y ago by Cullub‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Is there a way to improve my grammar without so much cost? [closed]

I'm definitely poor at English and I always have grammatical errors. After posting a question about what apps can I use to start writing my stories, I searched in this site if how can I improve my...

3 answers  ·  posted 8y ago by Invoker‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How do I improve "beige" text?

I have a tendency to write text that's on the "beige" side. I think it's the engineer in me that tends to write text that's very straightforward and strictly factual. To a certain degree, that's go...

4 answers  ·  posted 8y ago by Jason Baker‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Is it bad not to explain things?

Background So I see a lot of questions on the site like this. They're all about deeply explaining worldbuilding and stuff, doing all of that explaining type of thing. Normally, I just skip that. F...

2 answers  ·  posted 8y ago by Daniel Cann‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭