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General Q&A about the craft of professional writing, editing, and publishing. Questions about all types of writing are welcome -- fiction, technical documentation, scholarly articles, poetry, scriptwriting, blogs, and more.

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Meretricious - A bit too fancy?

I have a character that I want to sound very intelligent, well educated, someone who always uses the correct words with no unnecessary filler. I have found the word 'meretricious' which has the pe...

3 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by RichK‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Know any metaphors about women that...?

... are very skilled in getting men to like them, men really easily fall in love with them, but they (the women) are not interested in anything more than a sexual relationship?

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by Paul‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What are the key skills for a new technical writer?

For those that are just starting out, what are key skills they should have or learn to be a good technical writer?

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by Ralph Gallagher‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Software for analyzing a manuscript?

I would like to get a better picture of a manuscript I've written, especially in regards to word usage patterns and potentially overused terms. I'm curious whether anyone can recommend a document ...

3 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Cliff Hangerson Page‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Is there any good time-line software out there?

I write mostly speculative fiction, and use Scrivener for writing and note-taking. But I'm looking to start crafting timelines to keep track of the exact year and months events in the distant and ...

7 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by oldrobotsneverrust‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Checklist for making sure your writing is Atomic?

Question: Can someone please give me a list of things to check when reviewing a document to make sure that it is atomic. Atomic? Meaning that anyone can start reading at any section in a docume...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by leeand00‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Help! I've got Writer's Block

I really want to write, but as soon as I sit down and set pen to paper, my mind goes blank. I can't think of anything to write. Sometimes I stare at my screen for hours; doesn't help. If I do th...

7 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by newyellowshoes‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What exactly is an editor?

I recently read the assertion that many great works of fiction were chiefly down the contribution of a good editor. I must admit I was a little taken aback by this statement. I had never really tho...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by One Monkey‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Finding before/after examples where writing has been improved, to learn from

I'd like to see a series of example paragraphs, showing before/after a rewrite, to give me specific examples of how writing can be improved. Is there anywhere that shows such things? I once read t...

3 answers  ·  posted 14y ago by Magnus Smith‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Writing your last will and testament

Coming from a background where I've only ever seen readings of a last will and testament in movies, what kind of style would be expected of such a document? Some personal stuff and then legalese g...

2 answers  ·  posted 14y ago by l0b0‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Tips for humor writing

Are there any techniques you can use while brainstorming to find humor to include in an article?

3 answers  ·  posted 14y ago by Gary‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What disciplines/habits are used to stay focussed on one novel over a long period of time?

One of my biggest issues is staying focussed on a single novel. My imagination is always creating new and wonderful ideas. I write a few chapters on this story, a few on that story, but never fin...

2 answers  ·  posted 14y ago by Stu Andrews‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What can I do to improve my concentration when reading? [closed]

(I hope this is sufficiently on-topic - couldn't find anywhere else in Stack Exchange more suitable...) Currently I am having to do a lot of reading of academic papers - some dry stuff but not exc...

2 answers  ·  posted 14y ago by Mark Gibaud‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Verb tense for technical document titles

I'm writing a technical manual about creating database systems, and wondered what is the best verb tense for title names. My ideas are: Continuous (-ing) form: (e.g. "Creating a Cluster", "Creat...

3 answers  ·  posted 14y ago by Adam Matan‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Critique: Intro/Prologue to my Novel-in-Progress

all. Please forgive me, for I'm afraid I'm a novice when it comes to writing fiction. I wanted to get the community's thoughts and recommendations for improving the below passage. I realize it n...

3 answers  ·  posted 14y ago by Matt Caldwell‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to avoid hearing "that's me!" from your friends when they read your characters?

I recently asked about getting inside of someone else's head for writing good characters who are noticeably different from myself and received some great answers. One answer suggested that you sho...

3 answers  ·  posted 14y ago by justkt‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How do evil protagonists win the reader over in dark fantasy stories? [closed]

I thought about writing fantasy story from the perspective of the evil antagonist (think from Sauron's perspective). So my bad guy will be the protagonist and my good guys will be the antagonist. I...

7 answers  ·  posted 14y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How To Avoid Using Cliches In Storylines?

How is it possible to avoid cliches in storylines that you are writing? Obviously, there are external sources of influences as you read more and more. It would be possible that we are subconsciousl...

2 answers  ·  posted 14y ago by JFW‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Are there any techniques that make complexity work?

One for the creative writers, although I suppose a lateral shift might put it within reach of journalists/technical writers. As authors we all want to write, I would imagine: Something that many...

2 answers  ·  posted 14y ago by One Monkey‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Using uncommon abbreviations

Something which I see all the time in (popular) science writing is the use of abbreviations to indicate concepts. For (a made up) example: So when we're dealing with Anachronistic Meta Mechanic...

2 answers  ·  posted 14y ago by David Rutten‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Writing first programming book

I was recently asked if I was interested in writing a book for a pretty reputable publisher, which of course I accepted. I am not a writer by trade, I am a software developer with some technical wr...

2 answers  ·  posted 14y ago by Nodey The Node Guy‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What revisions for this draft would be more readable and/or more humorous?

Notes: My audience knows that adrenaline and epinephrine are synonyms. I'm new! I'm sorry if I abuse the site by posting this! Please critique ruthlessly. I would send by Facebook message to a...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by user1372‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Editors: Edit on first read, or read and edit on second round?

I edit novels (among other works). I was having a discussion with someone (not an editor) who didn't understand my technique. What I do is read through the document, and the moment something occu...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by Lauren Ipsum‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Why does an author need an editor?

I'm firmly in the camp of "your novel needs an editor, and that editor better not be yourself." But recently I was asked why that was, and I couldn't articulate an answer that was passable. Youn...

3 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by gmoore‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Should one blog in a few languages?

Greetings. I've been blogging for a while now and I do it in Russian. But, some of my English-speaking... AHEM "Internet-friends" are unable to read my personal blog, 'cause they're just not famili...

4 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Alexey Shatygin‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What's the best way to show a foreign language in a manuscript?

What's the best way to show a character speaking a foreign language in a fiction manuscript? Should the foreign words be italicized and include a translation? Should it just be included in the sent...

4 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Ralph Gallagher‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What does "Exposition and Ammunition – back story" mean in screenwriting?

I am just starting my first screen writing class and I got an assignment that says: Exposition and Ammunition – back story. I have been searching online but I don't get it. Can someone explain it f...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How can I write poems in an attractable manner?

I have written several poems, but only very few won prices. Those poems impressed people very much, so I want you to share your thoughts, what are the key things I have to focus on or I have to kee...

3 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Sankar Ganesh‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How do I construct a plot out of my many setting/character details?

In my creative writing, I typically am inspired by short interactions between things: An overheard conversation. A person's jealousy of a friend's talent. A humorous misinterpretation... I tend to...

6 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by JYelton‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How should dialog be formatted?

Is there any "official" rule that I should keep in mind when formatting character dialog? Line breaks, placement of quotes, mixing dialog with action descriptions etc. For example, I want to build...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by Ido Tamir‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Character with extreme manners

My objective is Victorian-style tea-drinking "upper class" lady characters. (It's more of a writing challenge.) Does anyone have any useful resources or tips for creating such a character? Persona...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by srcspider‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Good Outlining Solutions For OSX?

I write technical non-fiction and find that I cannot write well without first constructing a detailed (10-20 page) outline. Are there any good outlining solutions for OSX? Apps? Templates in Micros...

3 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Wolf's Dilemma‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What is the effect on the young reader when there is no "Happy Ending" in a story for children?

It is a common practice for a story for children to have a happy ending. Would it be considered inappropriate and disappointing for the young reader if his hero/heroine will suffer a horrible trage...

4 answers  ·  posted 14y ago by Axarydax‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Best humorous exaggerated comparisons

I love funny comparisons in newspaper articles or other texts. I am talking about things like "exciting like a winter morning" (except funny - I don't know any good English ones). What are the fu...

2 answers  ·  posted 14y ago by Franz‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Correct spelling errors while writing or after you've finished?

With the "write, don't edit" rule in mind, how should one handle mistyping? I usually stop or go back to fix the error as soon as I spot it, but often I feel this breaks the flow of writing. Shou...

3 answers  ·  posted 14y ago by erikric‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What tools do you use for your writing journal?

I usually keep a notepad and pen with me at all times. So, if I'm out thinking about a story and a scene or a bit of dialogue comes to mind, I write it down for recall later. I also keep a list of ...

1 answer  ·  posted 14y ago by Slick23‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How do you avoid purple prose?

I try to watch out for bland, overused adjectives and I keep adverbs to a minimum but -- I hear this phrase a lot and I'm not even sure what it means?

1 answer  ·  posted 14y ago by Ben‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How do I better handle my nameless main character when trying to retain mystery?

I have written a short story, and the main character is referred to as "he" right the way through - the idea being that this character is very guarded and mysterious. My plan was to not reveal the ...

5 answers  ·  posted 14y ago by Dan Hanly‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What is the preferred way to type out ellipses?

I have seen ellipses written out both with ("Well . . . gosh . . .") and without spaces ("Well...gosh...") between the dots. I've also looked at several different online writing style sites, and fo...

1 answer  ·  posted 14y ago by nessili‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Is translation work likely to help me develop my own writing abilities?

I've been offered work translating some creative works into English. Is this kind of work likely to push my creative boundaries, and teach me how to be a better write of my own original creative wr...

1 answer  ·  posted 14y ago by blueberryfields‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Byronic Hero characters

While reading up the characteristics of a byronic hero for my research, I discovered the following link: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Byronic_hero However, some elements on this list seem to be con...

1 answer  ·  posted 14y ago by Victor123‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Where to find some good examples of combat or action scenes?

I always learn a lot about about writing by reading other works and following their examples. Right now I'm very bad at writing action scenes; the best I can do is write around them, describing the...

4 answers  ·  posted 14y ago by tankadillo‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to write great movie review?

What should we write in a movie review?

1 answer  ·  posted 14y ago by pramodc84‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Short Story first or skip to Screenplay

I'm planning to shoot and direct my own short, small budget science fiction movie as a long term project to learn more about movie making. However, I'm at the very start where I need to write a dr...

3 answers  ·  posted 14y ago by GateKiller‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What to do about noun clusters

A personal frustration of mine is when I see a cluster of nouns sitting together in a sentence. I usually see these in highly technical emails, but not exclusively. Here is a particularly bad ex...

3 answers  ·  posted 14y ago by Garrett Bluma‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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When writing in third person perspective, how do you differentiate the 'she' or the 'he' from the other 'he's and 'she's?

Every time I write and read the 'she's and the 'he's especially in the same paragraph it confuses me and that worries me if the readers will get confused. Obviously through different actions and d...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by CheckersBoard‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Can overwriting be made to look intentional from a first-person narrative?

I am an aspiring author, trying to get my 80,000-word traditionally published, though I will self-publish it if that doesn't work out. this article suggests that we avoid it altogether. I've used ...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by HeavenlyHarmony‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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In which sections of a research report is it appropriate to include citations?

I have been doing some research on citations and haven't been able to get a clear answer on this. When writing a project report, in which sections is it appropriate to include citations? In this...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by henrie‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to write as a Neko Character [closed]

So my character is a Neko, which is half human and half cat, and I use her a lot in fighting scenes and I was wondering if anyone really knows how one could write that out, I assume that the fighti...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Lillian Barnes‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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When should a character refer his dad or someone close in third impersonal person?

When should a character refer his dad or someone close in third impersonal person? Let's say you have a character and his dad is the President of the United States. In what situation is it appropri...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by blackbird‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭