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General Q&A about the craft of professional writing, editing, and publishing. Questions about all types of writing are welcome -- fiction, technical documentation, scholarly articles, poetry, scriptwriting, blogs, and more.

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Coloured comments in a word processor [Word/Libre/OpenOffice] - is it possible?

Is there a way to have comments in different colours, in Microsoft Word, Open Office Writer, or Libre Office? (I am currently using Open Office, and I'm happy with it, but I am open to making the s...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Write for an audience or find an audience for your writing?

I've never written for anything other than personal enjoyment or for a predefined context before. I have ideas and partial drafts for several books and want to finish at least one this year. My co...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by linksassin‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Writing a character who is going through a civilizing process without overdoing it?

In my planned novel the main character is essentially from a less technologically advanced society and is learning about the "civilized world" beyond their village. He has above average intelligenc...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Seanchaí‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Injecting creativity into a cookbook

I'm a chef. I'm also a writer. It's inevitable that I would want to write a cookbook. In fact I've probably started a dozen that I just never got around to finishing. Partly because I'm not sure ho...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by AGirlHasNoName‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Should I include an appendix to reference words of an in-universe language for a fantasy novel?

Context I am currently working on a fantasy novel in which one of the main characters is a nobleman and scholar, studying exotic languages as part of his higher education and translating documents...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Sciborg‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Every character has a name - does this lead to too many named characters?

My tendency when writing is to give every character a name. Even the most minor ones. It says something about a nobleman when he knows every guard and stablehand by name, and it's something I want....

7 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Translating non-English lyrics to English

I am wondering what are some guidelines when translating the lyrics of a song to another language, because lyrics depend a lot on musicality (rhymes, syllables), it's very hard to maintain the same...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by repomonster‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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how can I showcase the internal struggles between a man and his demons?

The character in this story is a human-demon hybrid. He is good natured on a normal day, but because of the demon genes and blood coursing through him, as struggled with certain urges his entire li...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Incognito‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to write characters who hate when you don't understand it?

I hadn't thought about it before, but today I came across a writing prompt that involved hate. My mind kept running up against walls. It's not a skill I have ever worked at fostering. I can't think...

5 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Cherriey‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to fill novel if you have just some moments prepared?

I read some of my old novels and realized that I often filled them with unnecessary info and pseudojokes so I could quickly rejoin my favourite moments in the planned plot. I found those moments m...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Tux‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Semicolon or better prose?

Word's grammar check tells me the second sentence below requires a semicolon rather than a comma “If you don’t accept your physical limitations, you will burn out.” Elena was analytical again, ...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by Eric J.‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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I am afraid some scenes in my novel are too graphic for some people (Trigger warning: Sexual Assault)

Just to keep it short. One of my characters is sexually assaulted by her father. While not being descriptive of the act itself, the situation itself is quite an sad scene. This is relevant as the...

3 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by user36686‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Time gaps in a novel

I am having issues when it comes to how time passes in the book I'm writing. I usually find myself describing the day from start to finish, and that's just useless material since nothing relevant h...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Inés L. ‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How do I write different factions with ideologies, philosophies, and symbolism?

This may sound like a complex question, so let me explain what I mean. I'm inspired by Harry Potter, Avatar The Last Airbender, Homestuck (it exists), and all of those things have different houses ...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Willfire Z Tiger‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to make a grieving father less vengeful and see reason?

I have a character who, maddened by the suicide of his son, chooses to destroy the company the young man worked for, holding them responsible. He is a successful businessman who told his two child...

4 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Rasdashan‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Does symbolism have only one level of depth?

When I use symbolism, I think of replacing something concrete with an abstract idea, but can you use these abstract ideas and then tell a story inside a story that's inside a story? As in: Us...

3 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by repomonster‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to tell readers your story is a re-imagination of a popular story?

If for example, I were to rewrite a story heavily inspired by Romeo and Juliet, but placed it in a complete different setting. Do you have to say it? Also, do you mention it in the title that's it'...

5 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by repomonster‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What are some ways to implement multiple endings in a novel?

I am thinking of implementing multiple ending to one of my novels and it would be done the following way: There's a scene where the main character is about to do something, but I leave it to the re...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by repomonster‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How can I portray body horror and still be sensitive to people with disabilities?

Building on my answer in Proven psychological or scientific means of scaring people?, I'm working on a universal horror-theme structure for a branching-narrative series with an occult detective. I ...

6 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by wetcircuit‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Writing a short story in the same universe as my novel

In my post-apocalyptic novel, the MC Eris navigates the world of survivors and grapples with her newly discovered abilities. The leader of the group of survivors, and the book's antagonist, Ezrith...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by weakdna says reinstate monica‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What are the things to consider when writing a sequel to a novel from another author?

I am talking about writing a sequel to a novel that's in the public domain. For example, Wizard of Oz. As far as I know, this is completely legal; however, the issue is how to deal with the fandom ...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by repomonster‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How can I add more depth to my poem?

I used to write poems. I was in 4th grade, so I just wrote for fun. They didn't have any figurative language or symbols. My only goal was to make them rhyme. Here is an example of one of mine: ...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Marvin‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to write painful torture scenes without being over-the-top

I'm trying to write torture scenes but I'm not really all that confident about it since I've never written anything like it before and have never really witnessed anything violent. I know the metho...

4 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Tiana‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Is it plagiarism to use Google Translate?

This may be a very very stupid question but I need to ask it. I have written my dissertation in my mother tongue first, then began to translate it as I will submit it in English. While doing so I u...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by user36775‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Describing sex in a non-erotic fiction

How explicit should the scenes be? When writing any type of fiction I just skip to the day after the sex took place and heavily imply that the persons in question had sex. Is this ok? Is it better ...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by repomonster‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Characters speaking different languages

Let's suppose you can only write in English, and characters speak 2 different languages. How do you put it into writing. Consider 3 different situations: Person A speaks in language B, Person B re...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by repomonster‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Writing a fiction novel with poetic verses and handling dialogues

I am wondering how you should format dialogues when writing a fiction novel with poetic verses. I believe that the descriptive parts should be written in verses, but what about dialogues? How would...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by puffofsmoke‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Is bigotry always necessary in a story?

I asked a question here on how to avoid political issues when I have a witch MC named Kem who is nonbinary, and a few people suggested that instead of including any kind of transphobia towards Kem,...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by weakdna says reinstate monica‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to describe skin colour, if "white" is not the point of reference?

A character looks at another character, skin colour creates certain associations. A character looks at himself, and associations would be shaped by society, and by what is "normal" in that society....

5 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Latin names of European places

The novel I am writing is set in Europe. For the setting, I'd need to find the Latin names of places, e.g. villages and geographical features, in the regions corresponding to modern-day England and...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by _X_‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What are the advantages and disadvantages of copying writing styles?

I come from a non-native English speaking country and, from my own analysis, I will say I have an intermediate level English fluency (IELTS score 7). Some of the articles on my blog were chosen by ...

3 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by White Cloud‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Should I add racism in my book's world or have my world have no racism?

I've been writing a children's novel inspired by action cartoons, Star Wars, Lord of the Rings, paganism/Wicca, mythology and Harry Potter. It's a very dark children's book I'll admit, but Harry Po...

7 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Willfire Z Tiger‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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In the background of the Future

As I've mentioned multiple times, I'm writing a military sci-fi novel. The focus of the story is war, and that happens far away from Earth. However, I'm starting with my MC's "normal", on Earth. It...

3 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How important is the apocalypse in a post-apocalyptic story?

I am writing a story set after an apocalyptic event that has left only 0.1% of the world population intact. I originally wrote a zombie-like apocalypse but simplified it to a plague-like disease, a...

3 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Edgar Gordon‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Why is it that all the bestselling indie authors are based in the US (and, to a much smaller degree, the UK)?

I find this rather strange given that the English-speaking population of the rest of the world combined is much greater than that of the US (even though the US is the largest single market for book...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by user394536‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What are some of the tricks used to end a verse with a specific word?

I guess the answer depends on whether the word is an adverb, noun, adjective, or verb. When I write a poem, I often find myself with limited choices when I want to make the verse rhyme, so this wou...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by repomonster‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Could I have some characters reveal more internal monologue than others?

For context, I am writing a graphic novel. I always used to imagine I would have some characters (mainly protagonists) reveal their internal monologue while others (mainly the antagonists) don't. T...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by panzervcv‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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A question on determining audience

I'm taking a writing course and the biggest challenge I'm facing is figuring out my audience — particularly for something I have written where I didn't have an audience in mind. Some topics or styl...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by L.Jeanne‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Re-reading and making changes to current work that makes everything worse?

I constantly re-read my work before writing again. It helps me get in the proper mind set. But my biggest problem is that I make more changes on what's already there that I don't get further along ...

4 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Darryl Simpson‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Fictional cultures and languages existing in the same area? [closed]

So I've got this fantasy planet X, where humanoid peoples Y and Z are at war on an island nation about the size of England, and they've been at war with each other for hundreds of years. They are ...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by weakdna says reinstate monica‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How do you describe sentimental human physical interactions?

For example, Amanda just lost a battle in her life. When she met her best friend and mother, she lost it and started crying. The other characters comforted her with a hug, some talks, and some pats...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Benjamin‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Continuing a short story [closed]

I got an assignment from my teacher that tells me to continue a story that he started. The limit is 1 page. The scenario is that Rose (the main character) is looking for a missing painting, inside ...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by CatbusTotoroDustbunnies07‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Is using an online name generator a good idea?

When I'm stumped for a planet name or an organization name or something, I usually search on Google for a free name generator. But are the names in random generators copyrighted? If I used a gene...

3 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by weakdna says reinstate monica‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How is a semordnilap typically used?

I am asking whether I should use it as a hint to make it clear that my story is about the story of Adam and Eve. In my short story, there's a place called "Nede", with two characters called "Mada"...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by puffofsmoke‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Using symbols to refer to mythological figures

Is this something you would recommend. I went to Wikipedia and ended up on this page about the Goddess of the Dawn, Eos And one of the symbols associated with the deity is: grasshopper. So could ...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by repomonster‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How much description is too much?

A companion question for How much description is necessary, how much description is too much? I close my eyes, I can visualise my MC's bedroom (for example) in tiniest detail: the accent wallpaper...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Creating a fairytale for adults

A short story fairytale that I've been thinking about writing and plotting out has recently given me pause. It focuses on a witch and a princess who both cross faeries, but it isn't by any means f...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by weakdna says reinstate monica‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Ensuring that character dialogues sound like they are coming from different people

I am wondering if I should make the female characters speak in a different way compared to male characters, and I am wondering how to make sure they all sound different. What are some strategies, ...

3 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by repomonster‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Writing the dialogues of characters who are much smarter than you

A.I. should have perfect English, but because they are mainly servants, they should be easily understood. Cyborgs, on the other hand, not necessarily, because they're augmented humans, but some cyb...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by repomonster‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Is there a way to know if a metaphor is bad or not?

The rolling blades sank the ship. Here, in this example, blades is a metaphor for dangerous waves. Above the noose I saw the sun. Here, noose means water. The water is slowly suffocating...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by repomonster‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭