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General Q&A about the craft of professional writing, editing, and publishing. Questions about all types of writing are welcome -- fiction, technical documentation, scholarly articles, poetry, scriptwriting, blogs, and more.

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MLA-8: How to cite information with multiple sources

No abstinence-only-until-marriage program has been shown to help teens delay the initiation of sex or to protect themselves when they do initiate sex. This is directly taken from advocates fo...

0 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Travis‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Do I need a star's permission to write a fiction TV series inspired but not exactly as his life?

I want to write a fiction TV series inspired by a true love story between a star and his fans except that I'm going to represent the fans as an actual female character and make it a romantic series...

0 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Yostina‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What new plots are available to writers?

I read The Seven Basic Plots by Christopher Booker (yes, it was so heavy that I had to cut into two books just to be able to carry it around) and I just can't believe that the number of plots we ha...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by robertcday‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How do you deal with Chapter 2 when Chapter 1 is a volcano opening?

I know the logic behind volcano openings and why they’re problematic (they set the expectation that that level of action and excitement will continue; they’re a hard act to follow; they make a prom...

3 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by GGx - Reinstate Monica Cellio‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Antagonist lacks motivation - where do I find it?

My triller has an Antagonist who is classified as a sociopath and narcissist. He becomes infatuated with my MC who is an Ex-Army sergeant making a living in close protection services. He sees that ...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by Karma‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Does visualization form intuitions, or do intuitions lead to visualization? [closed]

When I get an idea from something, it feels like sometimes an abstract, inexplicable intuition leads to a concrete visualization (and a chain of logic), and sometimes it's the visualization and the...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by グルメ‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What is the name of the technique where quotation marks are not closed but reopened to indicate a break in speech

The wizard slid the application over to the goblin. "I'm afraid, Mister Barnes, we cannot accept your letter of resignation at present. You are simply too ugly to qualify for an exit scheme...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by Piomicron‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Should structuring an academic text with the help of questions be avoided?

In an academic writing course some years ago I remember being told that when writing, for instance, a journal article in English, one should usually avoid structuring one's text with the help of ex...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by jharme‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to link two sentences properly? [closed]

I have two sentences: In general, the better the equipment, the higher quality of production you will end up with. We choose our equipment very carefully. To link them together, I have to use t...

0 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by John‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to know if the story is going too fast?

I have a question, part subjective, part common sense I think... The conjunction of experience of some writers can be helpful for me. How you know if the story is balanced? ...I mean,how you know ...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by Alice McTwisp‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How do I handle English speaking where the language used isn't English but is translated in it? [closed]

I'm kind of having trouble with portraying one of my main character's English speaking foreign friend. My character and the country he is in don't really use English as the language they communicat...

0 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Richard Last‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Do my characters need to have different mannerisms in order to be perceived as different?

My editor returned to me with her initial critique of my novel, saying some characters were too similar, and that they had the same likes and dislikes and flaws. The characters she mentioned were ...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Klara Raškaj‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What is the "Proposal" Part of a Query Letter?

I'm trying to follow query guidelines that include a query letter, proposal, outline, author bio, and sample chapters. What is the 'proposal' part of the query letter? I have not been able to find...

3 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by James McLellan‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to make the villain's motives understandable if his logic is flawed?

In a story I'm writing, the villain has his motives for his attitudes. However, he is very mentally disturbed, which makes the logic of his motives be kind of illogic to other people (including the...

0 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Yuuza‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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I feel suddenly disconnected from my writing. Time for a break?

I’ve been working on a first draft of a project since January and have been steadily working on it for hours a day every day since then. Basically spending all of my free time on the project. Now...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by JennyDee‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How Can You Use "In Medias Res" To Beautify Your Amazing Masterpiece? [closed]

How do you write out the second build up without killing the essence of the masterpiece? What are the advantages and disadvantages of using Medias Res?

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by Phantom‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to write a good cover letter?

As I am applying for an internship in research labs writing a cover letter is the most important part while applying. I have gone through many websites regarding this, but I can't find the perfec...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by Curious mind‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Can I self-publish a paperback through Amazon KDP, but make the e-book available elsewhere?

I have self-published a paperback and Kindle version of a book on Amazon KDP. For the paperback, I got a free ISBN from KDP. My question is, can I also publish a free e-book version somewhere else,...

0 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by user3245747‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How do I convey that a relationship is platonic?

I've been toying around with the idea of writing a novel. The story revolves around two characters, one male and one female, and the perspective will shift between them. One of the central ideas...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Belgabad‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How do I start writing? [closed]

I have so many great ideas! I've completed several stories in my head but i've never put any to paper. How do I start? How do you start?

0 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Are readers tolerant of unique and bizarre character Names? [closed]

I'm trying to refine a name for my main character and characters in general but I will be focusing on my MC for the example of this question. My question is: What criteria would make a name hard fo...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by Seann Powell‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What does the death of a fictional character mean?

When should a writer kill their protagonist off? Inspired by a question about character lifetime and another about what makes the death of a character satisfying for the reader, I have begun to wo...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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I am overplotting my story - how can I figure out what is necessary and cut out what isn't?

I have recently discovered that the plot and cast of characters of my novel is so unbelievably complex that I am the only one who can actually understand it. I have too many characters, with too ma...

5 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by EmmieCG‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to quote a book in my novel?

I write as a hobby and so my works are pretty amateur, but I still try to keep my writing as legitimate and proper as I can. My novel is about how a teenage boy (who is notorious for being a bad de...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Dani2‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How can I hide a second narrative within my story? (using time travel)

I've been planning a story that follows two characters. At the end, one character (let's call him Joe) goes back in time and appears at the start of the book. I intend to explore themes of determi...

0 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Aric‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to express Nihilism without explicitly stating it? [closed]

In my novel, the character is sitting in a café sipping coffee, and she is watching a busy street of people rushing towards London underground after the office hours. I want to express the thoughts...

0 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How do experienced writers introduce the topic sentence halfway or near the end of the paragraph?

I have repeatedly come across the comment that experienced writers are able to put their topic sentence anywhere in a paragraph, but I wonder what that looks like and how they are able to do this. ...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by user3776022‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How much can the supporting sentences deviate from the topic sentence before introducing a second paragraph becomes a better option?

My question is: How much can one deviate from the topic sentence before transitioning to a second paragraph becomes a better idea? For example, if a topic sentence consists of an assertion, then ...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by user3776022‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How acceptable is "alternate history" in writing (nowadays)?

On another site, I wrote a critical review of a book that featured a "King Frederic II" of France who reigned between 1777-1819. I pointed out that this was a particularly unfortunate time to confu...

3 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Tom Au‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How can I convey an absolute truth from the author to the reader without a mentor character?

There are sometimes moments in works of fiction where the author needs to convey something to the reader without ambiguity. Let's say the situations around the characters get so weird that the auth...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Andrey‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Do I need to have a degree to become a writer? [closed]

I've always loved to write. Granted I haven't been writing very much these days because of university but I want to publish a book one day. I want to keep writing as a hobby because I want to do mo...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Faith‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Why is young adult romance now being written primarily in the first person?

My recollection is that when I started reading romance novels in the 1980s, the majority (perhaps 60%) were written in the third person. This included some "young adult" romances with characters in...

3 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Tom Au‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Does the degree of immersion in the character alter the extremity of plot points used?

Star Wars IV: We never really get to know Aunt Beru and Uncle Owen, and so when they're burned to a crisp, little pieces of human toast, it's horrific but yeah OK. Not as horrific as if we saw Obi ...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by DPT‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Which authors' style would be more appropriate for me to write in? [closed]

When I study the style of Ernest Hemingway, Raymond Carver, and other authors, I find that they use very simple language and simple words. But when I look at present day authors, such as Stephenie ...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by kakoo bacha‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How are descriptions and character thoughts handled in a screenplay (versus a novel)

I wonder if you write descriptions in a screenplay the same way you write in a novel. For example, I see writers describe the physical effects of the emotion of anger rather than just saying 'angry...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by Yostina‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Referencing a blog post in text?

I'm writing a book, and in the appendix I explain many of my inspirations. I reference many books like so: This part was inspired by John Smith's famous book Famous Book. However, I realized ...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by user30963‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Using a known personality model identifier in my fictional writing? Is it legal/frowned upon?

So I am writing a story where the magic system is based off of personality traits of the individual. I would like to base it off of something like the Big Five model or the Myers-Briggs model or ev...

0 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Dtb49‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Which is the best place to write a diary? [closed]

Which internet platforms can be used to write something like a diary? I am writing on blogger.com, and write at all because: I really enjoy writing, since I can do this for hours I like to quick...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by nayc‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to improve a "dry" scientific review article?

I am seeking suggestions to improve my "dry" writing style. I recently submitted a manuscript that was intended to be a review article on a particular scientific topic in the field of biomedical s...

3 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by B Chen‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How do you handle editors who materially change your writing after publication?

I'm a staff writer on a site that puts lots of emphasis on SEO. To that end, they have an SEO editor come back in to our posts after publication. The editor changes things like the abstract of th...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by Morgan Meredith‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What are the limits to description in story writing? How do I know if I have crossed them?

Time and time again, I have been told that my unfounded focus on description distracts from the main story line. I mostly write stories in English, which doesn't happen to be my first language bu...

5 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Soha Farhin Pine‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Can I use LaTeX in a fictional code-weaving?

I'm working on a magic system that works with weaving types of power. The most commonly used power source is a magical code. I'm trying to base this code off of latex. LaTeX is a math code that is ...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by FoxElemental‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Is it necessary to write only stories on Wattpad [closed]

I searched on the FAQs on WattPadd, it doesn't mention anything about short writings, or poems, so my question is, Can we write short poems, stories on WattPad apart from their promoted way of crea...

0 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Talha‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Technical review process when using FrameMaker

I'm an engineer. At my company, engineers seem to spend a lot of time reviewing technical documentation written by people who work in different offices and time zones. Part of the reason we spend...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by Eric Hirst‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Can religions like Islam or Hinduism be represented respectfully in a fictionalized/fantastical Earth?

I asked this question in World-Building but it seems better fit for Writing. I ask for a few reasons. Despite the specific arguments against speculative fiction within Quranic tradition and protes...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Mirzka‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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British style guides from the early 20th century?

This is more or less a follow up to a question I had previously asked. Reading British writers from the last 19th century, like Bram Stoker, and the early 20th century, like Bertrand Russell, Winst...

0 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Is Rob Zombie's Red Red Kroovy Trochee style? [closed]

https://genius.com/Rob-zombie-never-gonna-stop- Yeah, I'm on Durango number 95 Take me to the home, kick boots and ultra live See heaven flash a horror show Knock it nice and smooth step back a...

0 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Michael Downey‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Using questions in dialog to facilitate exposition

What are the guidelines on using questions in dialog (between ignorant characters) to expose setting and backstory? A few exchanges between my characters seem to fall flat. I'm trying to sort out...

3 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by DPT‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Does a report require a thesis? [closed]

As I understand it, a thesis is some point to be sustained by argument or proof. I've been asked to write a report on a class project, and the rubric says that I need a "thesis statement". However...

0 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Ashton Wiersdorf‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Access methods for magic systems with a Higher Being as the source [closed]

I'm creating a magic system where the "magic" comes from "Higher Beings" as a source. Besides the "obvious praying to the gods," can anyone tell me of any other methods for accessing magic from a "...

3 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Luke Snell‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭